Best Picture

I watched your Last Jedi review on youtube. I think it was pretty good, but it felt like you were rushing, like you could stand to take a breath, pause more, that kind of thing. I think maybe more structure to the review, too. Siskel and Ebert would start with a plot summary (no spoilers, not exhaustive, but just enough to let us know what the movie is about), then move into what they thought, and finally they would converse together, in agreement or disagreement.

Nitpicking: a couple edits were off.

Finally, I wasn't sure what tone you were going for. You had rapid cuts, which suggests a fast-paced, quick review, but I think you need slicker editing for that kind of thing. You need different camera angles, cutting to movie footage, etc. Your speech patterns, on the other hand, were similar to a news show, but you're not in a suit or anything like that. That speech pattern even changed, too. Later, you go into, "this is just my opinion, of course," and it's kinda wishy-washing, losing that authoritative feeling. The cursing comes out of nowhere, too.

That's my big question: what tone are you trying to set for your channel? It can be anything you want, but you need to be more deliberate about it.

All the positive stuff: you didn't "um, er, uh..." your way through the review. You were clear, concise, and gave a good impression of what you thought of the film. Your summary at the end was good - you finished off by succinctly telling me what you had said during the review (a capper like that is nice). You covered several different aspects of the movie. You didn't talk down to anybody. You were clearly aware of the dialogue around the movie - you didn't review it in a vacuum (the point where you talk about fan theories, for instance, shows that you have researched things pertaining to your subject).