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George Lucas' ideas for Phantom Menace were apparently better than his final script.


Highlight: While we have no actual first-hand copies of any of the early prequel scripts, in the case of Episode I we have a detailed summary of the revised rough draft. This comes courtesy of the 1999 CD-ROM The Episode I Insiders Guide--one of its features was a copy of the final script with annotations about how the rough draft differed. The script was not known as Phantom Menace but was titled The Beginning. Qui Gon did not enter the film until the Coruscant section and so it is mainly the story of Obi Wan Kenobi, an older, full Jedi Knight, who uncovers the invasion of Utapau (Naboo in the film), rescues the queen, lands on Tatooine and recruits a young boy named Anakin Skywalker to become a Jedi. The tone is more mature, and in fact Jar Jar is a more realistic character who speaks normally and is not so over-the-top. In many ways, it is actually superior to the final script. Look out for Darth Maul as well, who is quite vocal in this version.

http://fd.noneinc.com/secrethistoryofstarwarscom/secrethistoryofstarwars.com/thebeginning.html

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I remember that CD! I read the entire script on that, and there were some ideas that did not make it into the original film.

I did read up on early story ideas Lucas had for the movie, including some that were illustrated in the concept art. Some ideas included:

- Naboo being more tribal and rural, with a drawing of Padme petting some weird alien wearing a saddle.
- There being a sort of cultural racism between the humans of Naboo, and the Gungans, with the Naboo being kind of snotty. There's even an early idea of the Queen objecting to having Jar Jar on her ship and demanding he be gotten rid of.
- The script they show on the CD shows a needless silly argument between two little maintenance droids on the Trade Federation flagship that were watching the whole thing with Obi-wan.
- Showing Nute Gunray and his right-hand man standing on a balcony in chains during the Naboo Victory Parade at the end.
- In the script on the CD (and the kiddy novel they printed for those of us under 12) the first thing Anakin says to Padme is not "Are you an angel?" It was "I'm going to marry you." He was seeing a vision from looking at her. I have a feeling it wouldn't have gone over well with her or the movie audience, having a 9-year-old boy tell a 14-year-old girl he'd never met such a thing.

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Interesting

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very interesting.

i'd say that if you play the story out in your head, the rescuing of a pretty princess, the ship breaking down on tatooine leaving them hopeless and stranded and a young hero saving them and then fighting an evil sith lord sounds pretty cool on paper.

how it turned out is your own opinion.

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