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Think like a scriptwriter...


Top notch scriptwriters make hundreds of thousands of dollars for their writing. But have you ever watched a movie and thought: Man, what a plothole! Or, what a wasted plot opportunity! I could have solved that problem.

Give me your examples. I'll go first.

When Spielberg combined with Tom Cruise to make War of the Worlds, he decided not to make the aliens Martians (as in the original novel published back around 1900) because, to paraphrase, "audiences today know too much about the real Mars and wouldn't accept that in a modern version."

I could have fixed that with a few lines to the effect that the Martians came to Earth in the distant past to escape their dying world. They buried themselves underground (as in Spielberg's version) because ancient Earth was incompatible with their biology. They arranged for their machines to re-animate them at a future time when Earth's atmosphere was better able to support their life form.

Boom, done!

Explains the dead Mars we know today, explains why the ancient aliens emerge from underground. Thirty seconds of dialogue is all it would have taken to honour the original novel while still letting the movie unfold as we saw it.



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Over on the Hollow Man board I explained the science of why The Invisible Man would be blind. Invisible eyes can't see.

PaladinNJ came up with a creative idea to explain it away.

https://moviechat.org/tt0164052/Hollow-Man/5e5da00f9c15ae59a05ebd9d/Interesting-plot-flaw

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I'm in the camp that believes that, while it started strong, LOST eventually lived up to its name as it crashed and burned in S6 and that godfreakinawful finale.

The writers couldn't write their way out of the many dead end plot threads they had going, but I thought they had a great opportunity to at least tie together some of the nonsensical elements of the series.

If you look up the explanation of 'antipodes', they are essentially two points directly opposite from each other on the earth. For example, the antipode of the true North Pole is the South Pole.

The antipode of the Mediterranean Sea is the south Pacific, north-west of New Zealand. I figured that some sort of "tunnel" existed between these two antipodes. That would explain how polar bears and Ben Linus were able to appear in North Africa.

In the past, I imagined that this island was located in the Mediterranean at one time, and the Greeks knew of it. One day it was simply "gone" and the island and its disappearance gave birth to the legend of Atlantis.

It also explained how the Romans and Egyptians came to discover and explore the island.

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Definitely. In "The Matrix Reloaded" there is a scene where Neo, Morpheus and Trinity are looking for the Keymaker. Long story short, one specific line sets off a 20-minute action scene after they find the Keymaker. When I saw it I was scratching my head on why they decided to write the line in. It was so incredibly lazy and it was only written because they decided to write something else in that they shouldn't have.

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The War of the Worlds point isn't a proper plot hole. It's a creative decision that you might disagree with, but it doesn't necessarily break the narrative.

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I agree. It fell into my original post category of 'wasted opportunity'...

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Why does it matter that the invaders are from Mars, though? When you've got movies like Tom Cruise in them, you can't lose!

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SOMEONE ENJOYS ANCIENT ALIEN THEORY....I LOVE YOU.

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