I quite like your ending, but I disagree with your overall "The Ending was awful" The way I read it was, as soon as he pulled the trigger & shot McNamara...his anger dissipated & he knew, as McNamara had said: We both lose. It sunk in.
I read elsewhere in this thread that the Commandant goes home & does the honourable thing....suicide...(as obviously he will be hung as a war criminal)(As an alternative official film ending.)
In your ending...everyone dies on the commandants orders....
But did we really want that massive bloodshed just to prove how right WE were? (In WW2 I mean) Just to feel better as we left the cinema? Justified! We beat Evil!
No, I think we leave the film wondering what WE would have done in the shoes of either the Commandant or McNamara....That's what a film should do: Make US think! Make us examine our own consciences..... Both were strong characters: yet what made them tick? what made them so idealistic? (All films should do this in my opinion...it's what separates us from the pond life....No?)
One, despite being 4th Generation Army Stock...had achieved little in his own eyes, the other, a WW1 hero, yet 'relegated' to a POW camp....having lost his son already in this, the second world war of his own life.....
The anger & frustration of both men was paramount to making this film work. And work it did for me.
I enjoyed it. (And I enjoyed Bruce Willis's acting here.)
And as I say, your alternate ending is interesting, but I think the stark camera work in the films ending speaks volumes: The dark miserable despair of humankind: Despite our best efforts, whatever our beliefs, we see our own failures & our best efforts lost for eternity.......as nothing more than dust motes on the face of the planet. And that is all we will ever be. To be more,is to achieve the nigh-on-impossible....but it is what spurs us on.
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