Not bad - needed more focus

Like the title says, it wasn't bad but definitely could have been better. It's kind of short and without a specific narrative (for lack of a better word) unfortunately. I don't mean that word in terms of it needing a cliche good/bad guy and a lead up to them dueling it out or anything. I mean it in terms of a way of realting all these. It came off a bit scatterbrained and all over the place because there was no thread connecting these stories beyond 'all these people play magic'.

That's kind of a weak way to force in mini bios of these top rated players into a doc. I could collect 5 people who all have brown eyes and present a doc about their lives, but it wouldn't be interesting. Even at 65 minutes it seemed a little long. It should also have followed one rookie and one pro through an entire tournament or something just to give a better glimpse into them...



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