I made it half way, had to end it.

Its not that bad

You're braver than me, I think a 10 year old scripted the dialogue but at least the dude in the wheelchair apologised for the "not where but when" quote

I gave up after the project lead guy said some like "We all know that what we built was far too powerful if it falls into the hand of the wrong persons, especially the government"

I think ManlyMan is right, it's not that bad. It's not that good, either (I gave it a 6), but by stopping halfway you missed all the best parts. The second half makes a lot more sense, though some things still really aren't believable; there are some good action scenes with Bell of course doing her own stunts, always exciting to watch; and there's a nice little surprise in the denouement which fundamentally changes the nature of almost everything that came before.

"I'm here to help. Don't eat the help."

It comes off as a first draft, where logic hadn't been refined, and technical details had yet to be added. I got the feeling the writer obtained his technical information from watching bad TV shows about time travel.



http://writerblalley.wix.com/home

It's really not a bad story. The acting is pretty horrible and decisions made by characters don't make sense for a collection of smart people, not to mention the horrible introduction scene where the NSA agent in the van tells us who all the characters are by way of describing who each person is to her partner ... shouldn't he already have been briefed BEFORE the mission?