Season 2 suggestion

You’ve established the characters nicely. Now, as you put together Season 2, you really don’t need to sell everything quite so hard. Just memorize this phrase: Too much yelling.

A personal note: This is one of those shows that I watch & my wife doesn’t. All through the Season 1 finale I was super-conscious about the constant yelling by everyone, throughout the whole episode (as in “What the hell are you watching in there??”). Oh my god, it was non-stop. You can try to tone it down several notches in Season 2 – remember, quieter menace works equally well.