When you resort to the shock and awe strategy you haven't got a prayer
First- the language. REALLY? Is it necessary to talk that way? Blow jobs casually mentioned? Just swearing for the sake of swearing - where it actually adds nothing, nothing at all to the scene.
Second - hello the overt sexual content that are inappropriate ever. Actually talking about giving/getting oral sex? What the heck is that about? Is nothingleft for the audience to figure out?
Third- the story lines? OMG, so absolutely unbelievably STUPID!!
Your family or mine? Put me up for adoption, I would not want either.