Problems I had with Credibility
So, when Tom took Wendy and her daughter to the park that Wendy had never been to, Wendy had NO problem sitting on a bench that faced AWAY from the play area. A city Wendy was not familiar with and she had no problem taking her eye off her 6 year old.
Teanna is a Consultant. A consultant would not have a key to any of the registers!
I am sure I will find more story credibility issues (not goofs, just bad, not thought out writing issues). What are some that you all found?