Note how she first asks: "Will you give me MY child back?"
And Jamie replies: "It was MY child too." I don't believe the final cut made a point of it. It was all about Claire's pain.. Claire's child.. Nothing about Jamie's pain.. Or Jamie's child..
the real Claire who is able to snap out of her own pain and let him in.
It was very well written in the book.. The books refers to a dark cloud surrounding Claire, and when Jamie finally came looking for Claire, that cloud was beginning to tear apart..:
I knew that only Jamie himself could pull me back the rest of the way, into the land of the living. That was why I had run from him, done all I could to keep him away, to make sure he would never come near me again. I had no wish to come back, no desire to feel again. I didnāt want to know love, only to have it ripped away once more.
But it was too late. I knew that, even as I fought to hold the gray shroud around me. Fighting only hastened its dissolution; it was like grasping shreds of cloud, that vanished in cold mist between my fingers. I could feel the light coming, blinding and searing.
He had risen, was standing over me. His shadow fell across my knees; surely that meant the cloud had broken; a shadow doesnāt fall without light.
āClaire,ā he whispered. āPlease. Let me give ye comfort.ā
āComfort?ā I said. āAnd how will you do that? Can you give me back my child?ā
He sank to his knees before me, but I kept my head down, staring into my upturned hands, laid empty on my lap. I felt his movement as he reached to touch me, hesitated, drew back, reached again.
āNo,ā he said, his voice scarcely audible. āNo, I canna do that. Butā¦with the grace of Godā¦I might give ye another?ā
His hand hovered over mine, close enough that I felt the warmth of his skin. I felt other things as well: the grief that he held tight under rein, the anger and the fear that choked him, and the courage that made him speak in spite of it. I gathered my own courage around me, a flimsy substitute for the thick gray shroud. Then I took his hand and lifted my head, and looked full into the face of the sun.
That was one of the epic scenes Diana had ever written, IMO.
That they decided to cut all of that, but never fail to show us every single rape and torture scene is so, so disappointing.
Really, there are so many such scenes that could've been easily left out, and it makes little difference to the plot.. But this? This is THE PLOT.
CLAIRE & JAMIE.
It really boggles my mind that they don't feel the need to show us all the little nuances and depth of both Jamie and Claire's as individuals but most of all, of the two of them as a whole.
They totally failed to deliver that in Season 2. Very disappointing.
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At the point of Crisis and Annihilation, Survival is Victory- Dunkirk
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