Why Not Do The Same Show And Add Funny Things?
Show is well-done and interesting, and there are good moments, but why not also make it funny? It's often close to funny yet very rarely is.
The episode with the girl dancing in the audition for Stomp was funny for awhile, but the girl just danced poorly and it went on and on with no new moves. It's funny at first, then after a few minutes it's simply bad dancing by an annoying girl who completely lacks self-awareness. But we have no idea why she lacks awareness. Ends up being just random.
The scene in the episode where the guy sells weed to the muscular guy who keeps stalling on paying offers the promise of humor, or something, but ultimately it's just a highwire act two feet off the ground: no stakes, no humor, just discomfort played for discomfort, stretched out seemingly forever. The payoff is the guy leaving with a jar of coins. Ha ha!
Cringe-worthy humor is legit, but there needs to be something else with it. We can't just cringe the whole time without a laugh or a payoff.