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My shorts, good enough for V/H/S?


Actually I just want to hear your opinions on these shorts I made over the winter break, and since this movie is a compilation of shorts, it'd be the best place to do so, I think. So here they are. There are two. Each of them is approximately 6 minutes. Both are horror. Thank you so much in advance. You can throw in some comments on the video as well.

1. Odd: http://youtu.be/IW6lxhOALqA
2. The Next Door Neighbor: http://youtu.be/HT9N29BjstI

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Bump.

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Hey man. These were amazing! You should keep them coming. They could use more work in some aspects but overall they did give me the heeby jeebies in some moments.

Using the same interior and the same actresses in two very different ways between shorts, is a show of skill imo. Seriously keep it up my friend.

What could use more work:
- Maybe the music
- More acting skill (the males looked a bit zoned out)
- Longer segments with more buildup

Also, for VHS value, you would need more blood, gore and just sick disturbiness in general ;)

I don't know if you are a film student or do this in your spare time, either way these are amazing. Make more work!

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Very good

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