Could have been good with a few script rewrites

Seriously, the girls when they acted naturally were fine... but the plot holes were many and the story of killing the guys seemed rather pointless to the story, and the little girl and the old woman lacked development, and the ending was really bad.


I wanted to like it, I enjoyed the beginning, the girl acting all silly, hey don't go chasing creepy asian girls!!!! and appreciating the elephant... and then it tacks on a very poorly written moral of entitlement to boot... Such bad writing... and such a shame because it really had potential with better writing.

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