Shocking
I only managed a couple of minutes because the dialogue and the acting are cringeworthy.
"Jake ain't lying, though. We had a band powerful enough to turn goat piss into gasoline."
Your grammar is cringeworthy.
shareI am afraid that I have to agree with the OP. Yes , it has a great message but it does feel like a student film.
shareSorry I didn't realise the grammar police were here. Sorry that I offended you :P
"Jake ain't lying, though. We had a band powerful enough to turn goat piss into gasoline."
I don't see anything wrong with your grammar anyway.
shareIn honesty there was a small typo which I corrected. It said "is cringeworthy" instead of "are cringeworthy". I think I just upset her by speaking my mind about the film :)
"Jake ain't lying, though. We had a band powerful enough to turn goat piss into gasoline."
I think she was but I agree completely with you. I had to stop watching after an hour because it was just too poorly performed and poorly directed for my taste.
Ah, OK. That probably explains it. I couldn't watch it for long either.
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