Character Dynamics


At the end of Poison Harry calls Marou back and Marou says "what's happened?". My inference is that Harry is going to tell Marou about what just happened with Kitty. It would be ironic if this brought Harry and Marou closer as what Harry did to Kitty is pretty similar to what Lola did to Marou.

I like the dynamic between Gary and Marou. It's like the two who see themselves at the bottom of the hierarchy vying for second bottom spot.

Gary has to deal with a lot that the rest of the family don't know about and he's not as incompetent as they say. It would be good if he started showing his chops. Most of his skills are used getting himself out of situation he's got himself into though.

Pretty good writing I think.

I choose to believe what I was programmed to believe

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