Not terrible but bad pacing
The overall movie was cute but I do think it dragged a lot and it would've benefitted greatly from showing the collaboration between the writer and the editor at the beginning (rather than having a montage 10 minutes in).
I also think that there were a few too many things going on... if they cut out the whole "Darcy" thing I think they would've had more time to spend at the beginning or show us a few more scenes between Tom and Roddy (I thought they were hilarious).
I must admit I LOVED the ending.