£10,000??
No disrispect, but how and why did you sink 10 grand into this? The special effects are pretty decent to be honest, but can all be achieved by using off the shelf editing software. Doesnt look like you had to hire an editing suite.
What's it shot on? I'd be surprised if it's even a 5d.
Where in Gods name did you find your cast? They are truly shocking. I hope they are friends of the filmakers and not real actors? If they are, bit of advice lads. Stick to waiting tables.
Everyone was about 17 or 18 as well. I know 10 grand doesnt go far in this industry, but given the nature of this project, I would emagine that most of it was done for free or as favours?
Well done for putting this together, and some of the camera work shows flair, and style, but for me, I cant see where your money has gone, or why you chose to use it on a 40 minute film. Where can you market that?
With 10 grand you could have made a really punchy 5 minute piece with far better production values that would have sold you a lot better in my opinion. It could have gone into some good festivals and you could have hired real actors and crew.
Hope this doesnt come across too harsh. Im no expert, and certainly haven't done anything myself. Just offering an opinion.