LOL i know, wikipedia is definitely not reliable. But I should mention that much like Neil Jordan, I'm not as worried about the historical accuracy of the show, just moreso focusing on what would make for interesting drama, in connection with the current storylines already developed and our favorite characters. I would like to hold to some history but I don't mind taking a little creative license. Its just fanfic after all
That being said, I do think just having any child satisfies the direction of the story, so I can revise it to be a daughter, Louise. I'll post the revision when I put up episode 3, and I'll rewrite the bonding moment as a reflection Cesare has on Lucrezia, comparing his young daughter's innocence to that which his sister once had. But, Giovanni just doesn't work in this setup for Cesare - it needs to be his child, to explore his own personal sense of connection. And also, it needs to be something that his wife has over Lucrezia, one half of Cesare that gives her a part of him, an upper hand which she can kind of dangle in front of Lucrezia. That plays well into the jealousy theme.
For Ascanio - he's being blackmailed by Della Rovere, so he's not buddy up with him at all, and if anything he'll probably hate him even more for forcing him to be a part of his plot against his will. Its not that he's having a change of heart, he's just bending towards the wind. And really, its not that he respects the Borgias, he's just been loyal to them, he's 'Team Borgia' if you will. But can we really isolate any affection or admiration for them throughout the series? Ascanio goes with the hot hand, and he's smart. He knows who's on top and follows that person. So I haven't yet broken out the details for how it all happens, I'd have to give it some thought but you're welcome to make a suggestion! Its just a direction I want to stick with. I thought of perhaps having Della Rovere finding out about a family that Ascanio has and using them against him (this is a callback to S1 where I think Rodrigo went to talk to him and he was chasing some floozy around his room? so maybe he's got some secret kids on the side?) I like to use things the show already established so it doesn't feel like new stories are getting built on nothing.
On that same point, I'd prefer to stick with Baglioni, Vitelli, Colonna - all the familiar faces who got some airtime. More cohesive to the plot and wrapping up their own established storylines. I have always felt too many new characters in the final season of a show are kind of pointless.
If you'd like to PM me a few historical facts that would be great! Again, i'm just working with the basics, pretty much the way NJ did with the first 3 seasons. He may be criticized for some SERIOUS creative license, but hey we all loved the show right? So why stop here lol.
Shooting for today or tomorrow for the next episode tease! Stay tuned.
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