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Theres alot of lazy convenient moments in this writing


Like Dexter delivering the gun to Matt's house and his friend randomly decides to spill his guts to Dexter and tell him all about Matt's cover up with the boat. Then out of the blue theres this public incinerator in town that he just happens to think of to get rid of Matt's body with.

In episode 5 alone theres tons, he goes to the vet for drugs to use on the drug dealer, but it just so happens the vet is busy with an animal and tells him to just grab what he needs, and oh there just so happens to be big rolls of plastic there as well.

Then after the drug dealer reveals the name of the guy who makes the drugs, Logan walks out and very loudly while Dexter is in the room says "Here is the last known address of Jasper Hodge" and conveniently just lays it out in the open for Dexter to glance at. I mean Dexter was just pulled off the drug dealer, would you really walk out there where he is and say "Yeah here's the address of the guy incase you wanna go assault him".

Then we have Dexter with a body naked wrapped in plastic, the cops show up, and somehow he has time to put Jasper's clothes back on, take his body into another room and get rid of all the plastic and out of sight before the cops even make it up stairs.

You got Batista who just so happens to be at the same hotel Dexter's girlfriend has gone to, and he just so happens to bring up Deb and Dexter and even feels the need to mention Dexter had a son and even feels the need to tell her his name.

Theres just a little too much convenient moments that just seem lazy and not at all cleverly written in a way to where its at all believable.

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Perfectly said. Had the same conversation with my bf today. Even just one of those would be too much to believe. This many is breathtakingly bad writing.

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Yeah episode 5 was filled with them, there was some sprinkled in the first few episodes, but episode 5 was loaded like every other minute with lazy convenient moments that wasn't at all believable.

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I thought exactly the same thing. Everything just feels forced. Especially Batista saying Harrison’s name.

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Agreed -- but let's admit that all his kill room build-ups, tear downs and locations were always hokey, even at peak Dexter. And there was a logical reason for both Batista and Angela to be there. She went to this law enforcement convention, and he was a guest speaker on that particular subject. But on the whole, this entire reboot as been weak across the board. The old showrunner came back, but most of the writers are new.

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I can let it slide Batista just so happened to be there, but him going as far to tell her Harrisons name, i mean why? why feel the need to think of Deb's brothers kids name and make sure to tell her? A normal person would just go "Yeah he had a little kid too, it was tragic".

It just felt forced him thinking of the kids name and telling her like she needed to know it.

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Like I said, I agree for the most part, and the whole sequence seemed like just a fan-service hat tip from an old character.

Dexter was never quite chess when it came to storytelling, but I've given up on the idea that the old showrunner would bring back the best version of this show.

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I wouldn’t call this show a “reboot” since it doesn’t ignore previous continuity. It’s a continuation of the series.

Just thought I’d say that.

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You're right. It's a revival.

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Dexter (the show) has always done stuff like this. Always. It's never been a masterpiece of writing. It's extremely convenient and poorly acted show at times. It has a certain style to it. Everything goes his way so he doesn't get caught (or the show would be over).

Even when the show is at it's best, it still did stuff this. It's weird, sometimes you can let it go because the story is compelling, the show is funny, or the murder stuff is just entertaining. When all of that isn't clicking? It seems like a bad show. I don't know the proper word to describe it, but it can be very matter-of-fact about serious issues; even amateur at times. It's clearly intentional, because I've seen those actors in other things and their performances are different and better.

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The original never had lazy writing like the Batista thing.

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or how he hear's there's a guy named "whatever" in the next town over that's selling the fentanyl, and the first bar he waltzes into not 30 seconds pass before that drug dealer is hanging out there, has sold to a guy, & then walks over to the bar right next to dexter & basically introduces himself,
as Dexter, wearing expensive, tailored clothes, pretends to be a jittery addict jonesing for a high,
out the door to deal the drugs & the cops show up *rolls eyes*

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Lol yeah i didn't think about that.

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Thank you for posting this. I noticed it too. It started in episode 1 where Dexter's supposed to go with his girlfriend to some event, I forget what, (talk about lazy writing) but all of a sudden people know about it because word gets around in a small town. Lame.

And, yeah, the whole thing with Batista was ridiculous.

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Yes, there is convenience writing, but most of it is minor fluff as it was in the main series. For example, there were no personal items of Matt's in that underground room to suggest he was ever there in the first place. I can't recall if Dexter ever remarked about this aloud, or to himself.

The major oversight was the fact that Hannah never wrote/contacted Dexter about her cancer. He said in his letter to her to "reach out to him if..." I'd say the fact that she dies from pancreatic cancer and left Harrison alone to drift through the foster home care system stateside in Miami of all places was way over the top. I keep waiting for an explanation or some clever plot twist at the end of this reboot.

As for Kurt...what's with the draining of bodily fluids and attempt to cover up his recent victim's damaged eye all about? Is he preparing them the way one would a deer or other hunted game, a'la taxidermy?

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Nope, Chuck Testa

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And you still haven’t said anything about a tiny town where there’s a runaway girl that goes ‘missing’ ON A DAILY BASIS

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