It all depends on what you expect "better" to be. If you love it, it doesn't have to be better as it is in its best form TO YOU. Now, if you want it to be discovered and loved by the masses, then it must conform to certain plot structure guidelines which it does not. Many others here, besides me, have noted that the film is sort of "all over the place"... instead of sticking with a direction and goal, it meanders to fit it all in, some of which should be rewritten or dropped. The final edit seems like a script from someone that is too new and green to be writing solid, sellable scripts.
I can relate it to: if you want to make the WORLD'S GREATEST CUP OF COFFEE, you must have a mug, water, and some coffee beans... you don't change that and start with a straw, a plate and a grapefruit. CERTAIN boxes must be utilized if you want something to be something specific. Like a GREAT movie, over a lost one.
If one wants "Art House", then fine, anything goes. If you want to appeal to a mass audience (to make great money, since no film is made WITHOUT the idea of making great money), then you gotta fit it in the attractive box.
Seems like the TRAILER tried very hard to show that it fit in that attractive box, but the films execution did not. Show us the film from the trailer, and it would have done much better... and could STILL have been about the exact same topic it was.
I think the editing, score, and post production was great. It was the SCRIPT that had the issues to begin with.
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