I ordered this movie tonight because I am a huge fan of Diablo Cody.
I loved the premise of this story and thought the actors did a good job. BUT the story never took off where it should have gone.
The story felt rushed and the characters had so much to them and they were never developed. I truly felt like it could have been so much more. It was like a flower that barely bloomed.
My complaint about the movie isn't that it felt "rushed"--I don't even know what that's supposed to mean. My complaint, based on an early draft of the script, is that Cody screwed up by taking out many of the edgier elements that made me like it.
There was an entire subplot about Lamb being addicted to her meds and William being a former drug addict who actually steals her pills from her early in the movie (that's why she's surprised she ran out). Why she decided to make everything about sweetness and light and remove the elements the were dark is beyond me--Cody is best when her scripts throw in some darkness (think "Young Adult"), and she went in the opposite direction here.
Plus she over-did it with laying down that too-cute soundtrack. That just reinforced the wrong direction the movie took.
Still liked it a little bit, but it didn't live up to its original promise based on the draft I read. I was disappointed like most folks.
She didn't take out the pill addiction storyline. They actually go a great detail into it, dude.
As for William being a drug addict himself, I'm glad they took that subplot out. It was unneeded, and it invalidates how decent of a guy William was trying to be with Lamb. I'm glad she took it out of the final project.
She didn't take out the pill addiction storyline. They actually go a great detail into it, dude.
The final movie really subdued that part of Lamb's journey compared to the draft I read, so that's probably why I apparently remembered it incorrectly.
As for William being a drug addict himself, I'm glad they took that subplot out. It was unneeded, and it invalidates how decent of a guy William was trying to be with Lamb.
No, it didn't invalidate it at all--it made his decency towards her stand out.
Instead of naturally being such a nice guy without any kind of effort, as he got to know her throughout the night, he began to feel guilty. It gradually dawned on both him and Loray how special Lamb was in her innocence, and both of them made it a mission of theirs to preserve this part of her instead of just being effortlessly nice.
It also made his struggle with addiction parallel Lamb's, which brought out that side plot even more. And, it made the earlier scenes of him pretending to be a bit of a bad-ass more authentic.
But I'm glad you enjoyed the final version more than I did. Count yourself one of the lucky few!
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I felt it was rushed too..it had some interesting characters but everythjng felt like a race to me. Wish they could have slowed it down some and explored the characters more