I'd give a prize to this script (spoiler)

I find the overall script pretty good. Of course it isn't the most perfect screenplay ever. But I appreciate when the writer doesn't justify character's despicable actions. It's way too common finding scripts where the main characters get their evil actions justified. Here Emma and Caleb have sex and keep that hidden from Peter. There is nothing Peter did to make that less despicable. If it were a TV movie I bet Peter character would have cheated on Emma or something worst, just to make Emma's infidelity look better. I really appreciate the writer avoided that and made the script more real.

_Leo_