Damn good structure



thsi is very well written. not to mention well made in general, well acted. my only complaint is the DARN shaky cam. totally unnecessary and takes the viewer out of the movie. but other than that it was perfectly structured. building up in tension until a proper showdown. i love it!

great little setups with payoffs later, and twists and turns in both plot and motivation, and the issues and desires of the main char were compelling, plausible, and little scene-turns kept you watching for WHAT HAPPENS NEXT....

and the recurring element of 'dogs' was well done

i really enjoyed this movie.

surely this director will make more? i hope so



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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K2dKNeLqNas

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The camera they used to shoot this film helped give the movie have a better look. By better look I mean, it fit the theme behind the film, dark, gritty, indie... It had the right touch. I don't see any problems with it. I enjoyed the film myself as well.

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