The Ending. *Spoiler*
I'm a gay screenwriter myself and found the general story to be very good. However, as is almost always the case with gay film, I was angered by the ending. It was like they just couldn't let us have a happy ending. Are writers and critics this much more bitter and jaded than the rest of us human beings? I simply think the writer failed to create a proper resolution.
I could make up an ending of my own, but should that be my job as the viewer? The only resolution I could come up with is: Tong's family and himself were not ready/able to deal with him having a boyfriend so he couldn't have one. But if you're going to do this; Take a look at the ending of Get Real. The problem was the ending simply did not jive with the events that lead up to it and I actually said out loud - W.T.F?
In general though I enjoyed the depth of the story in that it wasn't one-note. I just wish gay films did not have to always end so negatively. Ironically, my screenplay (which is on the verge of being produced!) ends in emotional triumph and now I see why I was motivated to write it! I'm sure critics will say it's unrealistic. But isn't that why we watch love stories?