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Not bad, but needs tweaking


Opening monologue with Lewis: good.

The discussion portion. Very bad. I can see people losing focus here. Way too slow. They should allow the two debaters to interact much more, more argumentative. The two performers may as well be on separate sets.

Ripple of Evil. Very funny. Great non-linear speeches. From Oprah to seal world domination. From Catholic Church to mass cannibalism. I love non-linear thinking like that.

Final resolution: We've already heard enough from the debaters, no need for a 'conclusion' from them. Give the rest of the time to Lewis.

Overall: So-so. Starts good, got bad, but picked back up on the end. I know this is staged to be like a courtroom, but it doesn't mean you have to choke the comedy to force yourself into a theme. Let them argue more interactively in the middle, maybe have Lewis jumping in with the snarky comments. Closing arguments, scrap it entirely and just go to Lewis's judgment.

I'll watch it, but after the already-filmed batch of episodes, I would expect some serious refining. The show has potential.

[edit] Almost forgot. If they pick up the pace of the show, they won't need the laugh track.

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Agreed, nice summary.

Really though, they need to argue, unscripted, with Lewis... or something.


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ya i love lewis i have all cds and dvds but its called lewis blacks root of all evil i want more lewis and ya argueing would be funny so he can say order in the court

I AM FROM LOTS OF DIFFRENT PLACES...

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I agree with everything you have stated, but if I could add:

Debate topics: "Okay." I'm just rather tired of having to explain to people why Oprah and the Catholic Church were similar (mass followings) or why Donald Trump and Viagra were similar (er... not sure if I can use the proper language here, but you get the idea of how they're alike). Weed vs. Beer was a good topic, everyone got the connection there!

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