Whether you liked it or not, we would like to thank you for supporting independent filmmaking and for giving our little movie a shot.
If you haven't seen the special features on the DVD, you may not know... This was a micro-budget film. We shot it in just 16 days with one camera. We averaged (on a few days) 9 pages of script a day. The fact that the film came together the way it did is practically a miracle.
So again, thank you for checking the movie out. We're really proud of our work on it and happy that it's finding an audience.
I actually found this film on the "watch instantly" section on Netflix and really loved the film. I went and bought it from Amazon the next day and did watch the special features. I was incredibly impressed when i found out how limited you guys were on making this movie and I congratulate you guys on making such a great film. I have shared it with several of my friends who all loved it as much as i did.
Thanks for making such a wonderful film and hope it gets the recognition it deserves.
I honestly just picked the movie from the shelves because I thought my girlfriend would like it. I say honestly so you wouldn't have to sick Dakota after me lol
I'm just still wondering if she fell in love because he was the only guy to never lie/can't tell and only for that reason
or
because everything he said and done with her made her fall in love.
Well my take is she was curious of jonah because he didn't lie or she couldn't tell if he is lying (my opinion is he never lied to her). Then throughout her "investigation" of jonah she and he fell for each other. Although jonah said he fell for her since the first moment he saw her is a bit of a mystery to me, maybe love at first sight but that's a bit hard for me to believe.
Oh and I wonder if she ever watched the presidential speeches lol.
I actually saw this movie the same way. I was browsing indie films on netflix that were watch instantly and had decent ratings because I wanted to find good movies I hadn't seen before. I loved this movie. It reminded me a lot of me and my ex-girlfriend. Of course there were a few differences between my situation and the movie, but Dakota reminded my of my ex-gf and her bf in the movie definitely reminded me of her ex-bf who she was with when I met her.
very good effort, especially with just 1 camera and the limited budget/time.
i have a question... in a multi-angle scene (such as the in-car shots of 2 people having a conversation), the conversation flows without a stutter, and the background road/tire noise is consistent.
did you guys shoot the same conversation twice, and add the background noise in post-production? if so, was the dialogue also recorded in a studio and added later?
(just curious as i don't know much about filmmaking techniques)
Traditional film coverage works in a pretty specific way... You start with a Master (a very wide shot to give your audience of the geography, or setting and your characters placement within that space), then you move in closer for what is called "coverage." Coverage is where you "cover" your actors in a two shot or maybe a single (two shot is both of your actors in frame, while a "single" is one actor in frame). There is also a shot called an "over" in which you might catch just the shoulder of one actor on the the others coverage - the term refers to shooting over the shoulder of one actor onto another.
In the question you're referring to, one of the car scenes, a filmmaker could cover it several different ways. On our film, we didn't have a ton of resources, so the actors were actually driving in the scene. On bigger films, the actors are usually on a tow rig called an "insert car," or in the case of stunt sequences, the chassis of the car is placed on a rig known as the "Go-Mobile."
Anyway, in answer to your question, yes. The actors did that scene several times. Sometimes, we'd cut between takes and others we'd just do as a series - meaning that we never cut, we just roll into the next take and continue the scene from the top. So. We rigged the camera onto the drivers side of the car, raking across Ian Nelson as "Jonah" and getting Eileen's coverage. We'd do the scene all the way through a few times that way. Then we'd return to our basecamp and rig the camera onto the other side of the car raking across Eileen onto Ian. Again, we'd do the same scene a few times until the director got what he wanted.
As for the sound... well. The driving scenes in "Dakota Skye" were very difficult for us. Road noise and other ambient sound can often be a problem for indie films and I know our director had a really hard time smoothing out the rough edges on these scenes. What is basically done is that a Mixer in Post-Production takes chunks of the sound that fall between the dialogue (the ambient or "room tone"), loops the sound and layers it under the entire scene.
I don't recall how much of the dialogue was ADR'd or Looped, but we may have done a bit. If I recall correctly, most of the dialogue in these scenes is from the production track, meaning it was mixed on set. As a matter of fact, "Kevin's" SUV in the film was pretty loud, so JB Ghuman, Jr. did a bit of ADR on his driving scenes with Eileen. ADR is Additional Dialogue Replacement (or Automated Dialogue Replacement, depending on who you talk to).
Sorry of this is information overload. I'm happy to answer any other questions you may have about the process or to clarify anything I explained already.
Awesome. Just awesome. I picked this up on a whim - looked like an interesting idea for a story. The script is brilliant. The acting by the 3 leads right on. Not a false note.
About 1/2-way through I stopped to read this and the summary. I was knocked out to see the budget & schedule.
And the "I can't say" scene - perfect film-making. Great job folks.
3 criticisms, from large to small: 1) the lead loves 70s punk; her boyfriend is in a punky retro band; it's about teenagers .... yet the soundtrack is elevator music and sappy awful painfully bad folk. WTF were you thinking? 2) Too much narration up front. You're good enough, just make a movie. Narration is for sloppy filmmakers who are weak w/ visuals and too lazy to tell it on film. 3) Some of the "truth" subtitles distract you from the main story eg. the teacher deliberately lying about Jefferson & the slaves. You should have stuck to hard facts.
Sorry for all that. The music was a killer though - the worst. But despite that it was such a pleasure to discover something this fresh. It's way way better than bigger-budget films I've seen recently. If I hadn't read this I'd have though it was a Sam Adams (fake Indie) - something with big funding that's been made to look "raw".
I'm going to do my part and send it to every friend I have who likes good movies.
I think the director and screenwriter would be better suited to address most of your notes, but I will mention one on behalf of them: Our screenwriter (Chad Shonk) is a HUGE history buff - and I have noticed (over the years) several books on Thomas Jefferson on his shelf. I never asked him, but knowing his knowledge of history, I'd always just assumed that the true history of Jefferson was that he did, in fact, free only five slaves ("all blood relatives.")
I could be wrong, like I said, I never asked - it could be a bit of playfulness on his part.
For the record though, I think the original music in the film (written by Bay Dariz) is really good stuff and the score, I think is sweet - it is, as often happens, slightly influenced by music we temped in and enjoyed in other films (like "I Heart Huckabees"). But yeah. We were very happy with what composer Seth Podowitz brought us.
I don't know if the director or screenwriter will chime in here, but either way, I'm glad you were able to look beyond the few problems you had and still enjoy the film as a whole. Your comments were thoughtful and your praise of the film is most appreciated.
I suppose I begin to sound like a broken record here with all the "thank you" stuff to people, but it's viewers like yourself that are giving our film a life out there and it's pretty amazing for those of us involved who were just making a little film with friends.
I watched it through a 2nd time, watched the special features (which I only watch on serious movies as they're generally ads), and am now watching it a 3rd time.
1st, let me withdraw my 3rd comment. Stupid thing for me to say - I just missed your point. She hears the real truth of something so it doesn't matter what the teacher thinks/ knows/ says or for that matter what's generally written/ known about something. The truth she hears are the facts.
I'll stick to my comments on the music (sorry Seth). I don't think it fits the movie at all but, hey, I've been wrong before (see above). It's just that, gee, teenagers w/ piercings/ tattoos, smoking pot - and folk music: I don't see any fit. But I don't like folk so maybe I'm biased.
I also think maybe 25% of the beginning narration was all you needed. Narration - unless it's brief and gentle - is too distracting.
This sounds like a lot of b*tching. It's a great movie; it's just unreal how good it is given the budget and filming speed. Two of my friends took it out to watch tonight. I hope you get the audience and respect you deserve for it.
Thanks again for taking the time to reply. Your other folks don't need to chime in. This was great. best luck to you all.
OMG. I just love the movie! It's 5am here in Manila (Philippines) and I just finished watching the DVD. It's been in my drawer for over a month and it was only today that I decided to watch it (always busy). Thank God I decided to watch it. I love Jonah's character- well except for the 'getting high' thing- he's absolutely adorable. If I was Dakota, I'd do the same too-- go to New York and be with him- faster than lightning!
Thank you for making a quality film like this one. It's inspiring for indie-filmmakers like us.
Wow! So glad to hear that the film made it all the way there!
You thanked us for making it and we thank you for watching it. The film didn't truly exist for us until we put it out into the world for it to be found and watched and discussed... so like I wrote before, good or bad, it's just nice to read comments on here.
Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you but I've been busy with another film...
Guess I need to check into the comment page more often.
In answer to your question: I'm not exactly sure how long it took Chad to write the screenplay, but I don't think it took very long. "Dakota Skye" is, by far, his most personal script (if you watch the special features on the dvd, he kind of explains the genesis of the idea).
What I can tell you is that he had the script for something like 5 years before we made the film... and that once John decided to make it, there were a few re-writes (one of which changed the setting which had been Atlanta).
So, the actual writing was fast... but the journey to the screen was long.
Fell in LOVE with this movie, had one (if not the most) romantic scene ever and without a kiss... so amazing I cried and rewatched it over and over and am recommending to everyone I know!!
Hope to see more from the makers of this film as well as the three main stars (Ian, J.B. Eileen) that did such a wonderful job.
I'm in the Army and picked up this movie at the PX at Camp Victory in Iraq. I just finished watching this film. I just want to thank you for making such an enjoyable movie. Usually I set my standards low when I watch Indie movies but this one I didn't have to. I'm a Broadcast Journalist here in Iraq so when I watch films I really pay attention to camera angles and shot selection. I was shocked to see that this movie was filmed using one camera. Good Job! Filmed in just 16 days! I bet you are proud of your work. The actors did a fantastic job and the script and music kept me compelled.
So hope I you enjoyed my complement, and thanks for taking viewers input and comments.
Army PFC Zack Zimerman Broadcast Journalist 139th MPAD www.dvidshub.com keyword: Balad and Beyond
Just caught this on NetFlix instant. I enjoyed the story. I really liked when she starts to take control of her life instead of letting things happen to her. She seems to come alive then. The red hat that she puts on at the end, to me, is significant. It was the first time I noticed her wearing a bright color, like she wanted to be seen.
I don't know if John Humber (the director) or Chad (the writer) had that in mind (knowing them, I'm sure they did), but that's great! If we were still on the festival circuit, I'd have totally stolen your comment... just teasing.
Seriously though, I love that and, though I had never given her red hat much thought, it makes total sense.
I'm glad the film resonated with you and made you think.
Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. Again, I apologize for taking so long to respond... but above all...
T H A N K Y O U F O R Y O U R S E R V I C E.
It is pretty amazing to me that the movie found it's way all the way to an Army base in Iraq and I can only hope that our little movie will give anyone who finds it there a little sense of home.
I wish you all the best, Zack, for a safe tour and hopefully a safe return home.
I too watched this movie instantly on Netflix - not knowing what I woud be in for. This movie was fantastic, and I never really watch independant movies! So I have to say well done.
P.S. the casting (Ian was so cute and perfect for this role as Jonah) and music used in the movie was amazing as well.
Picked this movie up on Netflix Instant View, simply because it mentioned "superpowers" - wow, what a great movie. Well written, brilliantly acted, and subtly directed. Great job - and 16 days with 1 camera? 9 pages of script a day? Kudos.