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The original script to Sunshine Cleaning (spoilers)


I just stumbled across this. It's the original script. I don't know how many re-writes it went under, but after reading it, I would say what we actually saw in the theaters was pretty botched.

A lot of those questions were answered; where Norah's road trip took her, a real closure about Lynn, the purpose of her boyfriend, etc.
I know all of this couldn't make it to the final cut, and there's nothing wrong with leaving things open ended, but the movie would have been a much more satisfying product with some of these missing details.

Here is the link.
http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Sunshine-Cleaning.html

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thanks , ill take a look , i only saw this for the first time last night .. and came on here first thing today as i felt there may be answers to a lot of q's i had after watching it .

You become what you always were.... a very big fish ...

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Nice find. Just saw the movie a few hours ago myself and when I have the time I'm going to read the script.

Thank you.

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Agree with you. I like this film about Sunshine Cleaning.
At viewing film I all time recalled the work in Sparkle Cleaning, but I think that we shall not clean off the sun (http://seattlescleaning.com/).

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can anyone explain what happened in a shorter version?

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LOL. I forgot I posted this.

Long story short, they basically took a hacksaw to Norah's plot.

- Her boyfriend Randy was this sweet-but-dumb guy who she got tired of and dumped. He had a lot more dialogue in the script, whereas he only had a few sentences in the film. Randy had some thing about rabbits, I don't remember.

- After she and Lynn have a falling out, Norah tried visiting her one last time at the clinic. Lynn basically told her that Norah was bad for her and wanted to be left alone. Norah left, but not before giving Lynn the pictures her mother had kept. After Norah left, Lynn threw the pictures in the trash.

- Norah had an interest in Koko, the famous gorilla who knows sign language. She talked about it a lot with Lynn. In the end, when Norah takes off, she's actually heading to California, where Koko is. When she arrives, she went to Koko's cage and they were signing phrases to each other.

So that's about it. Maybe a couple of other things, but that's the gist of it.

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I don't think that would have added anything important to the movie. It just reiterates what we already know. Norah's "boyfriend" was a loser. Lynn didn't want to have anything to do with her mother, even after her death. And she was hurt by the reason Norah became her friend and realized Norah didn't have any romantic feelings for her. Norah's interest in sign language is unnecessary. She has no interests, no real friends, no life because she's still holding onto her mother's death. This is the purpose of the road trip.

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