Act one problem


It could have used just a spot of dialog like this:

ANDREW: "...I'll say the jewels were stolen, you get the money and my wife."
MILO: "Er, there's one problem"
ANDREW: "What's that?"
MILO: "As you've gone to great lengths to demonstrate, this place has video security out the wazoo. Not only will it show ME as the one breaking in - it'll show YOU COACHING ME...."
ANDREW: "Oh. Right. Well, I'll shut it off then."
MILO: "And how are you going to explain that you just happened to shut off all your security on exactly the night someone decided to rob you?"
ANDREW: "Uhhh...."

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