Needs to be re-edited
Hi!
I just saw this film at a college screening and suggest that it should be re-edited to have a story arc of some sort. The film seems to meander from topic to topic, and the big picture (despite an attempt to give background on the LRA) needs further clarification. Most documentaries don't jump around quite so much.
That is my opinion at least. I thought I'd post it here and see if anyone has ideas for how the film footage might be revised to have better pacing, educate better, and have a better emotional impact.
-Jon