Please William...or Bill Monahan (whatever your name is)

some favors needed

-cut out the sappy love crap. it was annoying in this one and I don't want to see that again or at least, not on the scale like this movie. ie. slow mo hand dropping of Keung's wife, just to show how dramatic her death was.

-no sappy music.

-better dialogue. I know you can pull this one off :D

-don't reveal the killer right away cause that would leave out the mystery. The revealing of Tony Leung's motives wasn't shocking and I was waiting for that scene to happen cause the pacing was so bad in this movie.

-Not Bill's department but better pacing please

yup that's pretty much it.