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Visual strength, narrative weakness


I enjoyed several parts of this film, but felt that it was not fully conceived or realized. Visually, there are many striking images, and the long, opening single take, of an impossibly large electronics factory, was just amazing. However, many of the visual themes seemed too similar and repetitious; more variety would have helped.

So much more could have been conveyed via the narrative - more exposition and data on China's rapid industrialization and its effects, and more about global environmental degradation in its many guises.

Not to beat up too much on China, but how about the Baiji dolphins that lived in the Yangtze River and recently went extinct? How about the finding that about one-fifth of the mercury entering Oregon's Willamette River originated in China? How about all the contaminated products coming out of China, including the medicine that killed hundreds of people in Panama? China's investment in new coal-fed power plants was mentioned (averaging one a week), but there was no additional information provided to place that piece of data in a global context.

So was the film conceived to be merely a series of arty industrial visuals, or something more? If the film wanted to make a serious "environmental impact" statement, it lacked the narrative substance to go with the striking visuals to make it truly compelling.

Some have said the film is reminiscent of Koyaanisqatsi, which is a very different film. Koyaanisqatsi is considerably more abstract, and the pace of that film is much quicker, propelled along by the excellent Philip Glass sound track. In terms of pace, this film is like Koyaanisqatsi on heavy barbiturates.

Scientist: Rare Chinese Dolphin Extinct
http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2006/12/13/tech/main2253676.shtml

China's mercury flushes into Oregon's rivers
http://www.oregonlive.com/news/oregonian/index.ssf?/base/news/1164009323157330.xml&coll=7

From China to Panama, a Trail of Poisoned Medicine
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/05/06/world/americas/06poison.html?ex=1337486400&en=e3228e6e5311fa0f&ei=5124&partner=digg&exprod=digg

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And how would you suggest that these topics be photographed? Let's not forget that the movie is about Burtynsky, not the country.

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How about with a camera?

The film appears to want to be much more than merely "about Burtynsky" but doesn't quite make it.

If at first you don't succeed, try, try again!

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I think that the point of the movie is being in missed here. It is not meant to be an Al-Gore-esque expository documentary about the environment. First and foremost it is meant to contextualize the photographs of Burtynsky. That being said, Burtnsky's photos obviously provide a certain amount of commentary on the environmental impact of industrialization. However, neither his pictures or the film are meant to be didactic. This is a somewhat open-ended film, as are his pictures. The film is more political than the photos are or were meant to be. The power of these images exist in their ambiguity and therefore to make a film in the traditional documentary style with and argument in hand would have taken away from Burtynsky's vision. This is not a typical doc but nowadays these types of docs are becoming the norm rather than the exception if you choose to look outside the mainstream Micheal Moore/Fast Food Nation type doc. While all the points you bring up about China are valid...those are points that should be argued in another film, not this one. Maybe the film wasnt what you were expecting but i think if you were to look at is from a different angle, one that keeps in mind the integrity of Burtnsky's art then you wouldn't be so frustrated with it.
This film is also a great commentary on the post-modern idea of image and representation... the idea that it is a film about photographs. Think about the scenes were you see the filmed version of the pic which slowly turns into Burtnsky's photo which zooms out into the gallery space in which the picture is being viewed.....

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I understand your point of view, and there were certainly many things that I liked about the film, but I feel that you're walking a very fine line. The mere act of turning his camera on anthropogenic environmental degradation, and calling it art, demands explanation in my opinion - what is this mess, and what is his purpose, his goal, his wish? (Is he trivializing it, getting some perverse thrill from it, or trying to galvanize outrage and activism?)

And now to make a film of it - the medium of film, with a soundtrack available as accompaniment to the visual - is simply under-utilized here.

You can say that this is an esoteric, very narrowly-defined film made for a very exclusive audience, and I can accept that.

Yet, my point is that like photography, the spoken word is an art form, a form of expression that was available to the film maker, but one that was not capitalized upon or developed to the extent that it could have been, in order to craft a more accessible, informative, interesting and/or compelling film.

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Once you've heard Burtynski in person, the entire perception of the movie changes. I heard him at the Elora Centre for the Arts a year or so ago, where photos that he had donated to KWAG were on display. To listen to him speak of the atrocities he encountered while taking pictures is incredibly moving.

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I'd very much like to hear him speak sometime.

Too bad they couldn't have included some of his lecture in the film, as a voiceover for a few of the sequences.

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First off, don't believe the blather of the other posters about how this movie is "about Burtynski" and not its subject matter. He is engaging the world as an artist, and using his artistic vision to tell us something. The film is not some biographical statement or post-modern, navel-gazing essay about photography per se. I am saddened/disturbed by the academic posturing that would reduce these portentious images to solipsistic, sophomoric philosophy.

With that out of the way...... I believe Burtynski himself says that he wanted to let the pictures speak for themselves. And they do! What narration do you need for many of these shots? They show the consequence of our modern lifestyle--the ecological footprint of our accoutrements. Most Americans think all manufacturing is done by computerized robots on some immaculate assembly line, that recycling takes place in futuristic eco-domes. This film is a shrill clarion call meant to wake us up from those preconceptions.

The pictures should alarm you. The fact that we, as viewers, derive a kind of aesthetic enjoyment from the sublimity of these monstrosities is not an excuse to disengage from the inescapable CONCLUSION of these photos: that we are irrevocably changing the natural world. You can ask yourself, is it for the better? I think the visceral impact of these photos give an obvious answer, but don't sell the film short because it didn't spell it out for you.

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