Im making a horror movie

Im making a torture horror movie. Filmed about 40 minutes of it so far. I spent about 30 dollars so far, fake blood & camera tapes. My movie is way better than Mr. Jingles. And Im the only one in the movie. Its filmed through the eyes of the victims and kidnapper / killer. theres 2 victims one gets tortured and killed by killer the other victim must torture himself to be one step closer to being set free. Blood looks good. Sound is great. Im filming this with a sony handycam. Where did the people that made this movie go wrong. (by the way u cant tell that im everyone in the movie cause u never see faces)
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