pretty amateur


the camera work was not so great, needed more cuts to keep it interesting. needs some color correction in after effects. i would recommend holding the camera during tense scenes. also, quicker dialogue would be better. the music is the worst part. this film suffers from a really cheesy midi soundtrack. if you're going to use digital sequenced music, you should use reason, which has better more realistic sounds. i would say that the fake sounding music was the worst part of this film. also, the score needs more percussion.

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Well I would say so as well but it was a Fan Film. I personally was surprised with the directing, for a fan film it was pretty good.

Some people count sheep. Doesn't work with AlwaysCool, just gets him excited.

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YOU A HATER!

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I'd like to see you do better XD

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This board isn't worth it's space O.o Did we see the same movie? Seriously. Batman Beyond and Dark Knight are *beep* Patient J was ace!!! Left me in awe. Go jump off a bridge or somethin...

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I have to agree, the film was well-written, no doubt, but the way it was shot really put me off. The camera angles and editing chosen by the director were far too basic, and it looked very much like a middle-school film project. It was all very basic shots, generally bad lighting (not by choice, but because the scenes were poorly lit), and mostly back-and-forth cutting... there wasn't anything daring or unique. It was like watching an interview on your local news channel- just basic, cheap camera set-ups.

As for someone else who said "You do better", well I'm in college studying film and video production, and I can safely say that most of the people in the video/film department could do a much better job shooting and editing. I've seen students turn in projects shot on cheap school HD-camcorders using rented-out lighting equipment from the school that had Hollywood-quality lighting and camera movement. (Although at the same time, I've seen a few students turn in projects that looked abysmal.) It's all a matter of how you use the equipment.

I'm not a hater, and I'm not knocking the film, but I seriously felt it could have used a different director. It was a solid fan-film, and the story was great, but the weak visuals did drop this a few points, in addition to a few goofy moments of acting. I'd give this a very solid 7 out of 10.

And FURTHERMORE, this is my signature! SERIOUSLY! Did you think I was still talking about my point?

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