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Unaccompanied Minors Fanfiction


OK, guys, I've read the many fanfics that have been posted on this board, and finally decided to give it a shot myself. I will prob do 2 chaps a week, one on Tues, one on Wed.

CHAPTER 1

*Grace, Spencer, Katy, and Sam are leaving the airport, just after SAm announced that he has no money left.

Spencer( reaching into his pockets): Well, dad, all I've got is five dollars.

Katy: Daddy, I've got 50 cents!

Grace( turns out her pockets ): I'm sorry, but I spent all mine. My parents may be rich, but they don't give me much...other than this coat, of course.

*Sam tries to smile.*

Sam: I'm glad you kids are willing to give me your money, but $5.50 is not going to be enough to get us home from here.

*Suddenly, Van Bourke walks by.*

Zach: Hey guys, have a Merry Christmas! *then, realizing that they look glum*
Guys, what's wrong? You made Christmas great for so many passengers, and even made Oliver happy. He's been totally miserable ever since his wife left him. Now, because you showed him how good it feels to bring Christmas joy to others, he has a new reason for living.

Spencer ( glancing uncertainly at his dad ): Well....I didn't really want to say this, but we're broke, and have no way of getting home. We've only got around 5 dollars between the four of us.

*Spencer's shoulders sag, and he looks at the floor.*

Zach: Well, guys, cheer up! I decided to keep my job, because of Mr. Porter being a new man, and it's thanks to you! How much money do you think you'll need to get home?

Sam ( hesistantly ): Well....if you could loan us $100 that should get us home.

Zach: No problem! * pulls out some money* And, it's not a loan. You guys have a wonderful Christmas, and come back sometime.

*Zach winks at them, and walks off.*

Katy( to Spencer ): You're friends with Santa's helper, too?

Spencer (grinning down at Katy ): Yes, I guess I am.

*Meanwhile, Donna and Charlie are finishing saying their goodbyes.*

Charlie: So, I'll call you sometime. You know, according to surveys, 97% of long distance relationships work if the two people involved stay in touch regularly.

Donna( smiling at Charlie ): You and your surveys.

Charlie( thinking of something else ): But Donna, what if I meet another girl?

Donna ( Pounding her fist into her hand ): Charlie, I think you know what would happen. *Donna raises her fist.*

*Charlie grins weakly.*

Charlie( timidly): Ok Donna, I promise that you're the only girl for me.

*Donna smiles, and lowers her fist.*

Donna: Well, goofball, have a nice Christmas.

Charlie: You too, slugger.

*They both giggle slightly, and head their separate ways.*

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pretty good. keep writing! but do some more about their teen years, you know? the other fanfictions just jumpimg "10 years later" "15 years later". just a suggestion

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yea u shud freddy... good idea... "YOUR FRIENDS WITH SANTAS HELPER?!?!?!" that line got me... ROFLMAO

I <3 Gina Mantegna, Quinn Shephard & Vanessa Anne Hudgens!!!

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I'd prefer to read about how the kids turn to drugs because they starred in a crappy movie when they were younger and have never gotten over it

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Wow that was really good. You should make a second part too!!

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* 5 years later*

*Spencer and Grace have been dating since they left Hoover International together. They are now at Spencer's house, sitting together on the couch, watching tv.*

*The front door bangs open, and in runs Katy. Her face is red and puffy, and she is crying.*

Spencer( running to Katy): Katy, what happened? Did someone hurt you?

Katy (through sobs ): No Spencer, it's even worse than that. Remember when I said I was no longer scared of Santa, after the night I'd had? It was because of this girl, Mary Lynn, who braided my hair, and gave me a complete makeover. The worst thing possible happened. Her family actually moved here, and now she's going to my school. She cornered me in the hall, and was going to give me another makeover, but then someone else came down the hall, so she left me alone.

Spencer (trying to conceal the laughter bubbling up inside of him): Katy, that's terrible! You should talk to a teacher about it.

Katy: I was gonna tell a teacher, but Mary Lynn threatened me. She said that if I told, she would give me a real special makeover.

*Katy shudders as she says the last part.*

Spencer: Well, maybe you should just try to avoid her as much as you can. By the way, I've got a special surprise for you.

Katy: You do?

Spencer ( smiling, he calls into the kitchen ): Charlie! Donna! Get out here!

*The kitchen door opens, and out come Charlie and Donna.

Spencer: Katy, you'll be pleased to know that they're not just here for today, they actually moved here.

Katy : They did?

Spencer: Charlie's dad decided a change of location would be good for him, since he was being picked on in school for being too smart. Donna's mom moved here, because Donna found out Charlie, her long distance boyfriend was moving here. Also, Donna's mom felt a little guilty about making Donna look like a loser, by making her sit on Santa's lap.

*All of them laugh.*

Spencer: I have even more good news. Donna will be going to your school, and she's in Mary Lynn's grade, so I don't think Mary Lynn will be bothering you anymore.

Katy: Why?

Charlie: Well......that night at Hoover, I only tapped her on the shoulder. Let's just say I won't ever be doing that again.

Donna: You'd better not, goofball.

*They all laugh at that.*

Grace (calling from the living room ): Hey guys, you're gonna miss the show!

*All 4 of them go in the lving room, and join Grace.*

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lol katy got a personal bodyguard... XP... this i likey... XP CAT FIGHT!!! RAWR =^.^=

I <3 Gina Mantegna, Quinn Shephard & Vanessa Anne Hudgens!!!

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no offense, but 2 bloopers i caught. chariles homeschooled, and the mary lynn girl was about 12 when that fateful christmas eve happened. so 5 yrs later she would be about 15. but great chapter!

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*The next day, in school.*

*The bell rings, and Katy leaves math, and begins heading toward English class. Then, all of sudden...*

Mary Lynn: So, there's my " Little sister". I was wondering where you were. I've been so bored without you. All I've had to play with was this stupid doll.

* Mary Lynn pulls a battered and worn looking doll out of her bookbag. The string has been busted off from being pulled so many times. The dolls hair has been braided by Mary Lynn, and the doll's face has so much makeup on it, that's it's barely recognizable.*

Katy: Uhh...don't bother me, Mary Lynn. I'm not one of your stupid dolls.

Mary Lynn: I know..you're so much better. You can walk and talk, and, unlike this stupid thing * Mary Lynn tosses the doll to the floor, with a look of disgust on her face* I don't even have to pull some stupid string.

As Katy backs up, looking horrified, and Mary Lynn advances on her slowly, menacingly....

Donna: Hey, kid. Is she giving you a problem?

Katy: Donna! I'm glad to see you. She wants to braid my hair and give me a makeover.

*Donna turns to Mary Lynn.*

Donna: Is this true? Are you so pathetic that you still play with dolls? You're 12. Aren't you a little old for that sorta thing?

Mary Lynn ( in a defiant voice ): So what if I do? I like giving makeovers, and that little girl is perfect. I gave her an extreme makeover a few years ago, and she loved it.

Donna ( with a look of disbelief on her face ): Ahhh...no, she didn't. And, if you bother her again, you'll be sorry.

Mary Lynn: Hey, I can give her makeovers as much as I want, and there's nothing you can do about it.

*Donna glares at Mary Lynn, and the two start fighting.*

Katy ( weakly ): Good luck, Donna.

*The two throw punches at each other, and finally Donna punches Mary Lynn in the stomach. Mary Lynn falls to the floor, crying, and grabs her battered doll, which is lying on the floor nearby. She clutches the doll with one hand, her stomach with the other hand, and cries a blue river.*

Donna: You're not so tough now, are you? I went easy on you this time, but if I ever hear you're trying to give makeovers to anybody, especially her *Jerks her thumb towards Katy* then you'll really have something to cry about.

*Donna walks towards Katy, and puts a hand on her shoulder.*

Donna: Well, kid, I don't think she'll be bothering you anymore. And, if she does, let me know.

*Mary Lynn is so flabberghasted that she barely squeaks out a thank you.*

Donna: No problem. And, would you do me a favor? Take that stupid doll away from her. She really is too old to still be playing with dolls.

*Katy easily pries the doll from Mary Lynn's hands, and throws in it the trash.*

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oh *beep* you go girl... XP

I <3 Gina Mantegna, Quinn Shephard & Vanessa Anne Hudgens!!!

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reviews, please...hopefully positive.....xd...chap 4 to come this tuesday

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It sucks. A little kid like Spencer's sister isn't going to speak in such long, mature sentences. Stay in school, kid.

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It sucks. A little kid like Spencer's sister isn't going to speak in such long, mature sentences. Stay in school, kid.

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It sucks. A little kid like Spencer's sister isn't going to speak in such long, mature sentences. Stay in school, kid.

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pretty good! keep writing!

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cool story its awesome so far. =D

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*That Christmas, on Christmas Eve night.*

*The tree is up, and the 5 of them are putting presents under the tree. Suddenly, the doorbell rings.*

Katy: Who is that?

Spencer( with a knowing smile): Oh, I don't know. I happen to have a special Christmas surprise for you all.

*Spencer walks to the door, and opens it. There, on the front porch, stands Beef.*

Spencer: Hey Beef! Glad your parents let you come.

Beef: Yeah, well my mom decided to let me come, so that her boyfriend wouldn't actually have the chance to put me out in the woods, with only a book of matches. Plus, she was feeling guilty about spending so much time with someone who didn't like her only son.

*Beef walks in, carrying an armload of presents.*

Katy ( to Beef): Spencer really must be friends with Santa! He's always giving me surprises.

*The 6 of them laugh.*

Spencer: Ok guys, now that we're all here....who wants to open a present? Just one each, so you have something to look forward to tomorrow morning.

*The other 5 show their strong approval of that idea.*

Spencer: Ok, who wants to open a present first?

*As soon as he says that, Katy approaches Donna, holding a present, which she hands to a very surprised looking Donna.*

Donna: Katy? You didn't have to get me anything.

*Katy smiles warmly.*

Katy: Just open it.

*Donna unwraps the present, and....*

Katy: It's Sir Poops A Lot. I've had him for seven years, but now I want you to have him. Since the day you beat up Mary Lynn, she hasn't bothered me at all. In fact, she moves to the other side of the hallway when she sees me coming.

Donna ( with a very surprised, and pleased look on her face): Uh....well, thank you Katy. You are a very sweet little girl.

*Donna hugs Katy.*

Spencer: Ok, nit to break up the party, but who wants to go next?

*The rest of them each open a present, and watch tv, while they enjoy the warmth of each other's company.*

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charlie opens his present and its an air freshner... XD so whenever he farts, it smells good... XD

I <3 Gina Mantegna, Quinn Shephard & Vanessa Anne Hudgens!!!

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"cool story its awesome so far. =D"

Oh, Christ, don't encourage her.

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side note: Thank you all for your feedback. Here's chap 5!

*In the middle of the night.*

*Donna gets up to get a drink of water. She stumbles through the living room, and sees Santa putting presents under the tree. After he's done, he turns around.*

Donna ( remembering that creepy Dept store Santa ): So, back for more, fat boy?

*Donna slugs him in the gut, and he falls to the floor, gasping for air. The beard falls off, and....*

Donna: OMG!!!!!! Mr. Davenport!!?? I'm so sorry. I didn't realize it was you. Are you okay?

*Mr. Davenport slowly gets up from the floor.*

Mr. Davenport: Yeah, I think I'm ok. But why did you do that. You seem like a nice girl.

Donna ( smiling sheepishly ): Well....let's just say it brought back memories of an unpleasant experience a few years ago.

*The next morning.*

*All 6 get up, and gather around the tree. They begin opening presents.*

Spencer: Cool! I got some restaurant gift certificates. Now, I can have all the mozzerella sticks I want!

Mr. Davenport ( smiling ): Sure, but don't tell your mother.

Donna ( gasping in shock ): No way!!! A surfboard!!!???

Charlie: Yeah, I know how much you liked that one in the uncklaimed baggage warehouse, so I got you one.

*Donna throws her arms around Charlie, and kisses him.*

Donna: Now, open your present from me.

*Charlie unwraps the gift, and.....*

Charlie ( surprised ): A CD player?

Donna: Yeah. I know you like eight track tapes, but you'll like this even better.

Charlie: Thanks Donna. You know, there are songs I'd like to get, but I can only get them on CD. Maybe eight track tapes really are outdated.

*They kiss again.*

Spencer: Alright, alright you two lovebirds....Grace, open your gift from me.

*Grace opens the gift.*

Grace ( totally shocked ): OMG.....Spencer!!!??? But, you can't afford this.

*Grace holds up a fur coat.*

Spencer: Well, I mowed a lot of lawns this past summer, and saved up for it.

*Grace throws her arms around Spencer, and they kiss.*

Charlie: Ahem, ahem, may I interrupt? I think it's time to give Beef his present.

*Beef opens up his present, and is even more stunned than the rest of them.*

Beef: But....this is aquaman. I mean...where'd you guys find him.

*The other 5 look at each other.*

Spencer: Well, when you hunt through enough second hand comic book and action figure shops, you'd be surprised at what you can find.

*Beef jumps up and down for joy.*

Beef ( to aquaman ): Oh, it's so nice to see you again. Have you had any good adventures?

*The other 5 smile, knowing that they have made Beef's Christmas.*

Spencer: Ahem, ahem....Katy.

*Spencer hands her a present.

*Katy opens it and....*

Katy: Wow...a new doll! It'll look great in my collection.

*Katy hugs Spencer.*

Spencer: And, I think we're forgetting who made it possible for us all to spend this Christmas together.

*Everyone looks at Mr. Davenport.*

*Spencer hands him a small package.*

*After Mr. Davenport opens it.....*

Mr. Davenport: I can't believe it guys.....a biodeisal gas card. How'd you know?

Spencer: Well, after seeing how much you hated driving thar gas guzzler, I figured you'd appreciate this.

Mr. Davenport: Thank you, Spencer.

*Spencer and his dad hug.*

Mr. Davenport: Well, now that we're done opening presents, I made us all some breakfast, including some of my famous scrambled eggs

Charlie: Cool!! I love scrambled eggs!

Donna ( looking at Charlie, and shaking her head ): Oh, no......

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it aint a air freshner but itll do... XD

I <3 Gina Mantegna, Quinn Shephard & Vanessa Anne Hudgens!!!

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funny and cool.

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*At breakfast, Charlie tries to put some scrambled eggs on his plate.*

*Donna grabs his wrist.*

Donna: Oh, no you don't, fart boy. You nearly killed me in the vent that night in the airport. If you eat scrambled eggs, I'll scramble you. Understand?

*Charlie nods timidly.*

*The remainder of breakfast passes without incident.*

*One hour later, outside, in the front yard.*

Spencer: Hey, let's have a snow fight!

*The others cheer for that idea.*

*The snow begins flying like crazy, as they all throw snowballs at each other.*

*Charlie scoops up a snowball, and starts to throw it at Donna.*

Donna: Charlie James Goldfinch, if you throw that snowball at me....well, you don't wanna know.

*Charlie slowly puts the snowball down, and gets up, only to realize...*

*Donna is smiling, and getting ready to throw a snowball at Charlie.*

Charlie: No, no Donna, come on, don't...

Donna: But Charlie, I made this one just for you.

*Donna kisses the snowball, leaving a little red lipstick on it. Then, she heaves it at Charlie. It knocks him down lightly.*

*Donna runs over to help Charlie up.*

Donna: Here, goofball, give me your hand.

*Charlie reaches out to take her hand, and pulls her down. The two laughingly feed each other snow, and lightly wrestle.*

*The other 4 stop throwing snowballs and watchthem.*

Spencer: Wow, it looks like those two really have fallen in love.

*Spencer looks at Grace, and the two kiss.*

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lol poor charlie but neways cool chapter

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lol totally what bbe said... i agree... XD

I <3 Gina Mantegna, Quinn Shephard & Vanessa Anne Hudgens!!!

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*At lunch.*

*They're getting ready to have lunch, and Charlie tries to scoop some baked beans onto his plate.*

*Donna yanks the spoon out of his hand.*

Donna: Oh, no you don't! I remember what happened the last time you had beans, Charles James Goldfinch.

*Charlie smiles weakly.*

Grace gives Charlie a conspiratorial wink.*

Grace: Hey Donna. I was thinking maybe you and I could clean up the wrapping paper before lunch, because these guys *Jerks her thumb to indicate Charlie, Spencer, and Beef* were too lazy to do it.

Donna: Sure, but Charlie.....you better be good while I'm in the other room.

*Grace and Donna leave the room.*

*Charlie quickly scoops some baked beans onto his plate, and woofs them down.*

*Grace and Donna come back in, and they all eat lunch.*

Donna: Hey, I have an idea. Let's take a ride and look at Christmas lights.

*The other 5 nod in agreement. Mr. Davenport walks into the room.*

Donna: Hey, Mr. Davenport. Wanna tyake us for a ride in your new humvee to look at Christmas displays.*

Mr. Davenport: Sure, we'll go after lunch.*

*Later, in the humvee.*

*A low, gurgling sound is heard.*

Donna: Charlie? Tell me you dudn't.

*Charlie grins sheepishly.*

Charlie: Well, I did have some beans...ooopss.

*Charrlie puts his hand over his mouth, realizing what he just said.*

*Donna glares at Charlie, while she holds her hand over her nose.*

Donna: We'll talk about this when we get home, Charles James Goldfinch.

Charlie ( weakly ): Donna...I love you.

Donna: Well, you won't love what I'm gonna do to you when we get home.

*The others look at each other, and mutter " oh boy" under their breath.*

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Are you going to make chapter 8?

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I will try to post Chapter 8 on Friday. If not, then Tuesday for sure.

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*Finally, they all get back home. It's gently snowing outside.*

*When they get inside, Donna turns to Charlie.*
Donna: Charlie, do you have anything to say to me?

Charlie: Uh..... I snuck some baked beans, but Grace was in on it! Remember when she had you help her pick up wrapping paper? She did that so I could sneak baked beans.

Grace: No, I didn't, and you know it.

Donna: So, trying to take my man, are you, rich girl?

Grace: So, what if I am?

*The two advance towards each other, and stare each other down.*

Charlie: Now now, girls, don't fight. Donna, I have another gift for you. I was saving it till tonight, but, considering the circumstances...I'll give it to you now.

*Charliue pulls out a small, rectangular package.*

*Donna unwraps it.*

Donna: Charlie, how did you know!!! This is, like, my favorite movie of all time!

Charlie: Well, I thought you'd like "Rocky". Let's watch it together, and forget this little tussle ever happened.

*Smiling, Donna puts the movie in, and they all settle down to watch it.*

Donna: This is great, Charlie, and I love you, but....if you ever pull another stunt like that again....well, watch the screen.

*Charlie gulps loudly, and sits back, glad that he got out of that one.*

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*The following Christmas.*

The group is mulling about what to do for Christmas.

Spencer: I have an idea. How about a stroll down memory lane. Let's visit Hoover International Airport, and relive our memories.

Katie: Spencer, those mempries were TERRIBLe for me. I mean, Mary Lynn......*she shivers just thinking about it.* The others laugh.*

Spencer: Well, Katy, I promise I won't let her get you, if we do run into her, which is next to impossible.

Donna: And, if Spencer can't protect you, then I will.

*All of them laugh again.*

*At the airport, they see a timid looking young man sitting in a chair, reading a Harry Potter book.*

Spencer: It's...

Donna: Van Dork, how are you?

*Donna gently slaps him on the shoulder.*

Zach (rubbing his shoulder ): Oww... *then, looking up ): Hey guys, haven't seen you in a long time. How have you been?

*They all say that they've been fine.*

*Van Bourke checks his watch.*

Zach: I get a lunch break in a few minutes, wanna join me at the airport restaurant?

Spencer: Yeah, just as long as that waitress doesn't remember me running out without paying after eating the heart attack special.

*They all laugh.*

*At the airport restaurant, Van Bourke approachs with a confident smile that is unusual for him. The hostess/waitress, who is the same one from a few years ago, smiles at him.*

Waitress: How are you Zach?

Zach( blushing ): I'm fine, Janice.

Van Bourke turns to the others.

Zach: Um, guys, this is my girlfriend, Janice. Janice, these are the kids I told you about.

Janice ( staring at Spencer ): Hey, I remember you. Heart attack special, and you never paid. But, your dad's email address was good, and he paid. You're lucky you've got a good father.

Spencer ( slightly embarrassed ): I guess I am.

*They are all seated by Janice.*



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I've been waitin for chapter 9 i missed these stories lol.

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Once seated, the seven place their orders. They decide on heart attack special all the way around.

Donna: So, Van Bourke, how have you been?

Zach: Well, I actually got promoted a short while ago. Some poor schmuck is now stuck in the job I used to have, dealing with rowdy UMs and all that.

Donna glares at him. Zach, see her glare....

Zach: Well, that's not to say I didn't enjoy being in charge of you guys. You were all more mature than the others. No name calling, food throwing, or burping.

Donna ( glancing at Charlie ): Well......we didn't do those things, but Charlie over there just about killed me when we were crawling through the grate.

Zach: Oh, no, he didn't. But he seems so polite.

Donna: Well, he is polite, but I don't think I'll ever get that horrible smell out of my mind. He did make up for it, though. He got me out of the grate safely. And, with me being claustrophobic, I really appreciated that.

Zach ( to Charlie ): Charlie, you've got a good girl here. *indicates Donna * She obviously respects you for your bravery, but no more farting around here, ok.

Charlie ( embarrassed ); Um, sure Van Bourke.

The food comes.

Zach ( to Janice ): You've been a lovely, lovely waitress. Now go take a break.

Janice : I wish.

They all start eating. Then, all of a sudden, Charlie breaks his promise to Van Bourke. All of them are coughing and gagging. Donna gets up, and starts towards Charlie, her fist raised. Spencer stands up, and stops Donna.

Spencer: Look, Donna. I know that was really disgusting *glares at Charlie * but maybe he can't help it.

Donna: Well, he better NOT do it again. *Donna glares at Charlie, and sits down.*

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poor charlie lol.

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You're really good at this. :D




And no, I did not have Conan O'Brien fall through the ceiling.

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Thanks, guys. How has everyone been?

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I just found this, thank you for the smile. My Daughter and I LOVE this movie and watch it at least twice every Christmas season. Good job, keep up the good work.

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Glad you're enjoying them. It's been several years since I've written any ones. Maybe I'll get time to reread my original ones, and will continue the fanfic story.

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