Obviously you didn't read my viewing guide or paper.
Tisk tisk.
Maybe he did and maybe he didn't but after the first page of your "Viewing Guide" (an interesting assumption of authority you make in thus providing so vital a service for those of us in need of your "guidance") I couldn't go any further.
You state that your "Viewing Guide" is
"... targeted at anyone who is questioning the blanket statements presented by the film. For those who are open minded and willing to see the reality behind the glitz." You thereby infer that anyone who disagrees with your position is neither "open minded" or "willing to see reality," thus engaging in an obvious propaganda trick of your own.
Seems we have a pretty clear case of the pot calling the kettle black here.
You also state:
"Most certainly, those involved in film, communications and speech studies should be interested, for this guide delves right up their expertise, and they are sure to pick up on the unjust propaganda methods used, perhaps even without this guide’s help" which, apart from being sub-literate, is almost too arrogant for words.
The first sentence in your guidebook is:
"Supposedly stemming from the heightened emotions of the Western world after a stream of terrorist attacks hit their soil, Obsession: Radical Islam’s War Against the West (Kopping, 2005) was produced under a cover of objectivity and factual reality in regards to the issue of radical Islam and its danger to society." That statement is absurd on it's face. I'm not sure where you think support for that claim can be found, but at the very least it betrays a misunderstanding of the word "supposedly."
With the first sentence of your research paper, you state:
"Throughout history, the United States has proven that our nation may not be the most responsible, in regards to standing up for the wrongs their people are suffering in times of crises. We treated the Japanese unfathomably, placing them in internment camps during World War II, and ruined so many lives during the period of McCarthy and the Red Scare."Apart from the undocumented and biased assertions, these are two of the most poorly constructed sentences I've read since junior high school. I'm not going to waste time grading your work, but I'll give you a hint: start with the word "their" and go on from there.
That sentence also reveals your clear and obvious bias. You make the politically correct assertion that the Japanese were treated "unfathomably" at Manzanar but do not exhibit a true historian's interest in objective understanding and contextualization. You breeze over these "facts" about America's "proven" "historical" "irresponsibility" with the clear belief that no one will differ with you, that these are simply known facts and settled issues. You are thus a liberal parrot.
You make the claim that:
"Though presented as an unbiased and straightforward documentary, “Obsession: Radical Islam’s War Against the West” is dangerous propaganda against the Islamic religion, misrepresenting and dehumanizing a vast culture."Interesting that you feel emboldened to make such a claim when you show virtually no understanding whatsoever of the actual tenets of Islam.
You confidently ascribe ill intent to the filmmaker's disclaimer at the beginning of the film by suggesting that they mean for us to:
"put down our guard and in the same instance give the filmmakers some credit for being so responsible" without it ever occuring to you that your analysis is presumptuous and wrong. The disclaimer is not designed to assure snotty, self-important college students of the filmmaker's "responsibility." It's to point out that despite the clear doctrinal support for radical Islamism, not all self-professed Muslims are violent fanatics who support the global jihad. This is simply true, despite the fact that Islam is a fundamentally aggressive, imperialist religiopolitical system and always has been since the days of its warlord prophet.
The language you choose to employ in your "scholarly" analysis, such as calling Obsession "abhorrent" and "dangerous" are further betrayals of your bias. You even have the audacity to cite Noam Chomskey as a source. Your paper is an obviously ideologically driven parade of false assertions and emotion-baiting, blissfully free of actual knowledge of the subject you pontificate on.
If this kind of biased, uninformed, self-righteous drivel passes for scholarship in universities these days, we're all doomed.
I hope you pass this response on to your instructor, and then I hope you pick up a book. Start with the Qur'an.
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