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I might make a short USM movie....

posted 18 years ago by thecheetoman2004
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I am making a Spiderman fan film this October. It is totally retelling the Spiderman story. There will also be three villains. Their costumes wont be all dazzling(example: Venom will be a guy wearing black shoes, black pants, black hoodie and the hood will be covering his face.) The Green Goblin will be a guy with a green business suit and a goblin mask. The two other villains will be Rhino(a guy wearing a helmet with a cardboard horn taped to it. it will be spray painted grey.)The movie will mainly be a retelling of Spiderman's origins in my own words(and my own changes and ideas.) For example one of my changes is: Instead of Peter fighting in a wrestling match, he visits an urban fight club.

Comment on my ideas.

-Randy

"Meet me at the waterfront after the social!" Angela-Sleepaway Camp

[–] MattyHdot 18 years ago

I like it... may not be the fanciest thing, but put it on YouTube when you're done!

Sometimes I feel like a Smurf... so Smurffical...

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

I plan to. Lol. So whats up any questions about it?

"Meet me at the waterfront after the social!" Angela-Sleepaway Camp

[–] MattyHdot 18 years ago

How will you do Spidey's webbing, ect.?

Sometimes I feel like a Smurf... so Smurffical...

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

I'm still working on it. If you have any suggestions, feel free to tell me. I would appreciate it.

"Meet me at the waterfront after the social!" Angela-Sleepaway Camp

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[–] MattyHdot 18 years ago

The only thing I can think of that even closely resembles a web is Silly String... lots and lots of Silly String.

Sometimes I feel like a Smurf... so Smurffical...

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

sure dude tell me ur ideas. My idea for venom is he will be dark and mysterious. He will be sort of violent and he is dressed in all black(black shoes, black pants, black hoodie. the hood will cover most of his face.) but let me hear ur ideas. Seeya later

-Randy

"Meet me at the waterfront after the social!" Angela-Sleepaway Camp

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

oh cool cant wait to see the pics.

-randy

"Meet me at the waterfront after the social!" Angela-Sleepaway Camp

[–] Samuel-Brooks 18 years ago

how about instead of just one, have a Venom Clone as well, and Spidey realizes he must destroy the Clone maker's lab to stop him from making an army of them? or maybe, the Venom Suit gets onto an Animal? Venom Bear? Venom Tiger?

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[–] spence711 18 years ago

please tell me shocker's in it and whatever you do make him cool i hate the fact that the ultimate series made him fight like a sissy

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

well, the minor villain for the first movie is Rhino and the minor villain for the second one is.......

SHOCKER but I will make him tougher than the USM series makes him

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] spence711 18 years ago

i got a great idea for a scene

a man in a trenchcoat walks into the first national bank he walks into the center of the bank he looks around everyone is minding their own buisness he moves his hand closer to his mouth

man:clearnce to start the party boys

all of a sudden 5 crooks with ski masks on and armed one of them shoots in the air

crook 1:everyone get down on the ground now!

the security guards take out their guns the man in the trenchcoat takes out his gloves and shoots them they fly all the way to the wall the man takes off the trenchcoat it's shocker!

shocker:good work boys now get some money and do it before spider-man gets here

crook 2:sure boss

shocker is walking to the front door

shocker:and be sure to take some hostages!

he walks outside he sees a police officer in his car calling for backup he takes out his gloves the cop see's him and jumps out of the car shocker shoots at the car it explodes

shocker:that ought to buy us some time

he walks back in the bank and down to the other crooks

shocker:let's move people if were lucky we'll be out of here before the cops show

he walks to the vault crook 2 and 4 are standing in front of it

shocker:what's taking so long?

crook 2:we can't figure out how to get it open sir

shocker:well i just happen to have a key out of the way boys

shocker points his gloves at the vault door crook 2 and 4 run away from it he shoots the door the hinges break off and it hits the back of the vault crook 2 and 4 go in and grab bags of money

shocker:hurry up!

sirens are going off shocker see's 3 police cars outside

shocker:damn!

shocker shoots one of the cars it hurls into a resturant behind it we see spidey land on a building next to the bank

spider-man:huh wonder what the commotion's about?

spidey drops down to the street he looks at the bank he sees the crooks

spider-man:well spidey time to do what you do best fighting crime and not trying to get killed

spidey swings in

spider-man:hey guys if you wanted a withdrawal you could of just asked the banker nicley

crook 1:it's spider-man

shocker:i'll handle this

shocker takes out his gloves and begins to charge them

spider-man:that can't be good

shocker shoots blasts at him he dodges them throwing himself into a office space he looks and sees a man hiding under his desk

man:please don't tell him i'm here

spider-man:shhh it's gonna be all right

shocker walks to the office

shocker:oh spidey!!!

spider-man grabs a coffee mug and throws it at shocker he shoots it spidey jumps out of the office and runs at shocker shocker regains his sights on spidey he blasts him spidey goes flying into a wall

spider-man:something tells me that should of killed me

spidey gets back up his spider sense starts tingleing

spider-man:uh-oh

shocker starts shooting again spidey runs up the wall and jumps behind a column

shocker:oh come on spider-man you're making this a little harder then it should be just come on down and let me blow you away

spider-man:that is a good idea but how about this one!

he jumps from the coulmn onto a wall shocker shoots at him he jumps to a steel column holding togethter the building he shoots a web at shocker it sticks to his chest shocker tries to pull it off spidey pulls on it to make shocker hit a wall by the vault his face is stuck in the wall the crooks look at their boss

crook 1:boss?

they have their sights on spidey

crook 1:get him!

they start shooting their guns at him he jumps dodgeing them he gets on the ground he shoots 2 webs that stick to crook 5 and crook 3's gun he pulls them back they go flying behind him crook 2 shoots at him he jumps and lands in front of him he punches him crook 1 runs at him spidey clothline's him crook 4 surrenders spidey webs him up

spider-man:well just another day in the life...of spider.....man

he looks at the place where shocker hit he's not there

spider-man:uh-oh

he looks behind himslef he gets blasted

spider-man:okay that seriously hurt ow!

shocker:if you think that was a suprise you're in for a real shock!

shocker is about to shoot spidey he shoots a web at the ceiling and pulls it down a piece of debrie breaks off he grabs it and puts it in the way of the blast it explodes sending both shocker and spidey flying

shocker:oh that's it no more mr.nice guy

he gets up and so does spidey

spider-man:come on shockey boy let's do this

shocker grabs a girl

shocker:don't even think about it wall crawler

spider-man:no don't

shocker:now wall crawler were playing my way no highway!

spider-man:okay just don't hurt her

shocker:okay now give me 2 of those bags

spidey throws him 2 of the bags

shocker:thank you

shocker shoots him the hostage gasps

shocker:now time to get down to buisness i won't need you anymore miss

he is about to shoot her suddenly something black hits him he goes flying into a wall the girl is unharmed we see a 7 foot shadow over the girl she faints the shadow dissapears spidey gets up from the blast

spider-man:well that could of went better

he gets up and see's the girl he goes to her he checks to see if she'salvie she is he looks for shocker he's against a wall unconsiounes

spider-man:what the? well at least everything turned out okay

the police come in the hostages are okay and shocker is webbed up to the wall the camera goes out and we see spidey swinging once again

so what do you think?

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

its good but since i have already written the first one, it would have to be in the 2nd one and I dont have a big budget i have low budget(kinda like The Green Goblin's Last Stand)

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Samuel-Brooks 18 years ago

I know exactly how you should show Venom facing Spidey when he tells spidey his name is Venom

have it so Spidey is knocked on the ground, slowly squirming away, and Venom is taking slow steps towards him...

Venom: I... am like poison... to you. I... AM... VENOM!

Would You Like To Know More?

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

thats awesome also i also have sort of a "catch-phrase" for eddie(note: i am kinda changing the story a bit. like eddie is a friend of peter but the symbiote makes him hate him.) ok it goes like:

Through out the movie, Peter says "Best friends forever, right eddie?" and eddie replies " Yeah until death takes us apart." and then in the final fight, Peter is trying to reason with Venom. "Eddie! Don't! Best friends forever, remember?" and then eddie goes " yeah until death takes us apart, isn't that right Petey?"

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Cody_Talent 18 years ago

make sure venom calls himslef "we"

God is as real as spider-man

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

hey sorry for the long pause between updates but heres some updates:

1. This will be the 1st of three movies.
1st movie: Spider-Man: Origins(venom, green goblin, rhino*minor villain*)
2nd movie: Spider-Man: Identity Crisis(The Chameleon, Kraven Shocker*minor villain)
3rd movie: Spider-Man: Carnage Unleashed(Carnage, The Prowler*minor villain)

2. Venom will refer to himself as we.
3. It will be 60 to 70 minutes long.

Until Next Time True Believers,
randy

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

hey chettoman i added you as a buddy on myspace! (animal_i_have_become is me)btw

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

i know and thanks for the add by the way. now, any questions about the movie??

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

yea how will venom look?? and what program will you use

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

Venom:

Ok Venom isn't really a "symbiote" per say. It is more of a parasite. It infects Eddie Brock and it changes his attitude, and everything. It even makes him stronger but at the same time, slowly killing him.

Venom's look:
Since it is just a parasite, he dresses in all black(black shoes, black pants, black hoodie with hood up. White contacts*maybe* for white eyes, and maybe fake teeth for fangs.)

any other questions??

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

how are you gonna make the movie?

off the game the movies?
or is there a program you use?

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

no it is live action. i am teaming with teen film company JL PRODUCTIONS to make it

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

what villains will be in it or be referenenced

i got an idea for venom if you are gonna put carnage in have venom kill someone at their blood mixes with the symbiote and he goes psycho
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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

well in the first one:

Venom
Green Goblin
Rhino(minor villain)

second one:

The Chameleon
Kraven
Shocker(minor villain)

third one:

Carnage
The Prowler(minor)

Cameos in 1st one:
Nick Fury

Cameos in 2nd one:
John Jameson

Cameos in 3rd one:
Thor, Hawkeye, Nick Fury

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] spence711 18 years ago

if you make a fourth one will you put in electro cause when you think about it he could be a world wide crisis

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

for right now i am only making 3. but im leaving it open-ended

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

will you put on here ,youtube , or myspace?

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

youtube.... now any more questions

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

when do you start it again?

lol i know i have alot of questions huh?

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

I plan to start mid/end of october

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

can i help write?

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

actually, writing is almost complete

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] Jokester0827 18 years ago

hey cheetoman check your myspace pm's

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[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

ok

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

heres the plot for Spider-Man: Origins-

After helping teen scientist Harry Wong Jr(Kevin Mai) set up for his presentation about genetically altered animals, Peter parker(Kooper) gets bit by a radioactive spider. And so he becomes Spider-Man. But many people become curious about Spider-Man's identity including Gwen Stacy(Monica England), Flash Thompson(Steven Burrell), Kong(Mike) and many others. But in an experiment gone wrong, Harry Wong Jr becomes The Green Goblin. It takes Spidey a few times to beat him and beat him he does. But when all seems well, Eddie Brock(Taylor Goubeaud) stumbles upon a parasite codenamed V.E.N.O.M. it infects him and he becomes Venom. Now Peter must fight for his life and the lifes of the ones he loves: Uncle Ben, Aunt May, and Gwen Stacy.
"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] tombennett91 18 years ago

How lond till its made?

EAT THIS!!!!!!-Hicks
{no matter what happened in alien3 hicks is alive.}
I was BradleyBennett.

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

well, we plan to film in late october and a spring 2007 release

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] thecheetoman2004 18 years ago

Heres the Cast List(so far):
Harry Wong/Green Goblin- Kevin Mai

Eddie Brock/Venom- Taylor Goubeaud

The Rhino- Taylor Dominy

Peter Parker/Spiderman- Kooper

Flash Thompson(he is the jock character.)- Steven Burrell

Kenny "Kong" Harlan(sort of overweight)Mike

Liz Allen(flash's girlfriend)- Amber

Gwen Stacy- Monica England

Nick Fury(african american leader of S.H.I.E.L.D.)- Trevor(in talks)

Betty Brant(J. Jonah Jameson's secretary)- Caitlin DeWitte

Now here are the minor characters that will be in the film:

Kraven The Hunter(he appears at the end)- Simon Martinez www.myspace.com/sammar7

Police Officer 1- Falcon

Police Officer 2- Curtis

Teacher: Jenn

Student 1(who says stuff like "Look its Spider-Man and actually talks to the main characters)- Kate DiGiacinto

Lady Who Sings "Spider-Man, Spider-Man does whatever a spider can"- Jannet Nguyen

NOTE: I give some ppl by their first names only because 1. They want me to keep their last names secret until the movie is out.... or 2. They havent told me yet

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] spence711 17 years ago

i have another question what is or will be your youtube account name?

[–] hhswn1 17 years ago

Yeah, and what are the orgins of the parasite?
I think you can actually make a different series of Spiderman!
There was Classic Spderman, then someone made Ultimate Spiderman, and thiscan be like: "Alternate Spiderman" or something.
Im really looking foward to it.

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[–] thecheetoman2004 17 years ago

hello again true believers!

hhswn1 wrote:
Yeah, and what are the orgins of the parasite?
I think you can actually make a different series of Spiderman!
There was Classic Spderman, then someone made Ultimate Spiderman, and thiscan be like: "Alternate Spiderman" or something.
Im really looking foward to it.

The origin of the parasite is: Eddie Brock has a problem where he must take pills to keep down his adrenaline, if he dosen't he goes crazy and it makes him stronger.

Also, I am making this like a new series of Spider-Man.

Also everyone, go to fanboytheatre.com and go to forums and go to Coming Soon. You will find a Spider-Man: Origins thread.

"I'm Here, humbled and humiliated, to ask you one thing: I want you to kill Peter Parker."

[–] BobFlame 16 years ago

The "Harry Wong Jr." Character is like Norman and Harry Osborn fused together into some Asian Guy,right?Interesting and at least It avoids The Badass Norman and Wimpy Harry Problem that`s plagued so many Media Interpretations of The Spider-Man Mythos.

[–] thecheetoman2004 16 years ago

It pretty much was that. But bad news...the project has officially been cancelled.

But it could happen sometime in the future...with an improved storyline...perhaps a little closer to the comics.

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