I liked it, but what was the point?
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed the movie- I thought the acting and most of the dialogue was realistic and interesting. However, I feel it could have been better with a little more development. Bare with me, this post is quite wordy- I was trying to do it quickly, and as a result I probably failed to filter or edit my thoughts.
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1. The storyline or subplot of Joan (Lisa’s mother) dating Ramon didn’t really seem to connect very well with the rest of the story. It was obviously included in the movie for a reason, but it was hard for me to understand what that subplot served as or its purpose. What did her relationship with Ramon further explain about the characters, which would make it relevant to the story?
2. Lisa and Joan’s relationship was not explored enough. As an audience, we can tell that their relationship was rocky and a bit tense, but how was the nature of their relationship relevant to Lisa’s character, development or who she was as a person? It’s possible that they were trying to connect Lisa’s relationship with her mother, to the relationship she tried to establish with Emily- but if so, I don’t think it was done smoothly or as coherently as I would have expected. (For example, they could have portrayed Lisa as “longing” for a healthy and motherly relationship- which would have connected the relationship with her mother smoothly with the relationship she had with Emily).
3. Lisa’s relationship with her friends and the male characters seemed unnecessary because the relationships didn’t explain anything outside of the moments she was physically with them. Questions that could be raised: Why did she go back and forth between those 2 guys? Did she have any feelings for them? Why did she decide to sleep with Mr. Aaron? It is inferred that they had a connection before the incident, but what that connection consisted of was not explored. Again, how was “the way she was as a person” relevant to any of those relationships? I was never really able to say, “this situation made sense since she is going through blank experience, or because she is blank type of person.”
4. I think this was supposed to be a coming-of-age story, and a coming-of-age should depict a character’s (or characters) development over time. Basically, it should show a character that is changed or different from whom they were in the beginning of the story. I don’t think her character changed very much. There were many instances where this could have been explored. She lost her virginity and witnessed the injustices that can occur in life (the lawsuit didn’t end up the way she thought it should have), but I don’t think they explored “how” those events changed her. The movie showed her being hysterical after the lawyer explained the conclusion of the lawsuit, but the movie didn’t really show in what ways that event shaped who she was as a person. By the end of the film, Lisa and her mother embraced each other at the opera- so I imagine that scene was supposed to signify some “growth” or development on their part, but why? How and why did their characters get to that point of “connecting” to each other? Again, we might be able to draw some sort of conclusion from that scene, but I wish the writer/director did a better job at linking that scene (among others) to the rest of the movie.
To sum-up all of this, I guess for me, many of the scenes and subplots seemed random, and didn’t appear to have much to do with anything the central story was expressing. If anyone can explain them to me, that would be great...maybe I missed something.