I first watched the five minute preview/short film and then read the script.
When I saw the preview/short film I thought it was great.
Then I read the script. I think it was good in theory, but it needs work.
First off, it needs a more satisfying ending and a different plot twist. Secondly, I don't think Superman or the Flash (or any other superhero) would be so bureaucratic that they would turn on each other.
That's just my constructive criticism.
Also, after watching all 91 eps of Justice League, I'd find it hard to believe that these characters would become the types to give each other so much crap, ESPECIALLY the Flash. I love Grayson the short film, but in that script....that AINT the Flash I've come to like.
shareThe reason to why the Flash is different in Grayson the script from the Flash in Justice League is becuz the Flash in Grayson is Barry Allen, the second Flash; the Flash before the Wally West Flash, and Wally West is the Flash in the Justice League cartoon.
shareWhere can I wacth the short film or read the script?
"The world will look up and shout, 'Save us!'. And I'll whisper, 'No.'"