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Grayson Screen Play is released!!!!


I visited UntamedCinema.com as I always do every so often and "Holy 8 1/2 x 11, Batman....." There was the screen play available for download by JF himself.

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Reading through it now. Pretty cool, though there's a few grammatical mistakes ("their" instead of "there" for instance). The "bathroom scene" with Catwoman was a little weird (was it thrown in there just to try to be "sexay" in the same vein as X-Men 2? It sounded stupid, but maybe it has some point later on).


But thus far it seems like a really cool script and I'm having a good time imagining what it would be like if it were really a big screen movie (and with the "trailer" in mind). Too bad it'll never see the light of day...

But maybe it could be made into a novel? (graphic or text or both!)

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though there's a few grammatical mistakes

though there are a few grammatical mistakes

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Thanks. ;)

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I've read well over a hundred screenplays from finished shooting scripts that weren't nearly as interesting (and they get made into feature films), as Grayson. Yeah sure, it could use a little polish here and there, but for what it is; it's fantastic. Honestly I would be interested in seeing what JF could do with a decent sized budget for a movie like this one.

Watching the trailer and watching and listening to JF on the behind the scenes was great. Just goes to show what a decent imagination and a whole lot of personal drive can do for a person.

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wow, this is awesome, I can't wait to read it!

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Can anyone who's read it give a good synopsis (i.e. detailed beyond what's evident from the trailer)? Any surprises? etc. Thanks. And yes I'm lazy.

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