unorganized


That's the one word that comes to mind when I try and sum up how I felt after watching this movie. I understand the point the movie is trying to make: that you must keep fighting in the face of adversity. This was a valliant attempt at making that point. The story in and of itself is beautiful, but, I just felt that what needed to be a mini-series was packed into a film. There was too much going on. The candle motif was overrated and underexplained. The love scene between Jason and Pip (other soldier) was unnecessary, I felt, and only added confusion. Plus, what happened to the singer that Jason fell in love with?? After seeing how Jason devoted himself to the singer, supposedly, then loved the other soldier, I expected Pip and Clark to wind up with one another. The point is that it was too confusing. Just becasue homosexuality, abortion, pre-marital pregnancy, drug use, street life, and sexual abuse are taboo topics doesn't mean that slapping them all together in a movie makes it ground-breaking. Times may change, but tasteful delivery of messages through art doesn't. I would give this movie a 6. I didn't feel I wasted my time. Obviously the writer was trying to make a beautiful point. I like the message, but I thought it was overdone. Just leave it basic. That was the first advice Randy Benson gave my film class when he gave a lecture to us: "Keep it simple, stupid!" There were too many characters with too much motivation with too many problems with too many stories...as confusing as that sentence was, the movie was equal. I think that had Pip had a meaningful relationship (or at least somethign that didn;t go from one night to one and a half months out of nowhere), it would have made it more believable. I don't know. I liked the movie, but it could have used work. I look forward to seeing more from this writer, and I'm sure it';ll improve.

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Times may change, but tasteful delivery of messages through art doesn't
Boy, have I got news for you! As well as a few History of Art courses for you to attend.

...Which is really sad, if you are indeed studying film and have such a simplistic attitude regarding art and its interpretation and evaluation.

Other than that, I have to say that the story between the two soldiers was the best part of the movie. That scene was completely unique, tender, and at the same time, charged with emotion. Brilliant work, both in writing and in acting.

There are a lot of weak points, I agree, but I don't think they have to do with organization. The structure is rather clear: the past comes back to help a young man deal with his own recent trauma and the way it has affected his present life, as well as offer him a chance at redemption. Everything came together towards the end, so I really didn't find it disorganized.

What I did feel was a bit problematic was the way some things really were rushed through or built up in a very predictable way, mainly Pip and Jenny's love affair. Still, even that had good moments, such as when Pip tells Jenny why he's celebrating their 1.5 month anniversary. You can really understand why someone would fall in love with him at that moment. Or the very end, when he's trying to redeem himself through his new found family, including Clark.

So it has its problems, but they're not that accute and in the process it delivers you a few true gems.

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*shrugs* I've seen plenty of war movies and I have seen none like it.

Discussing too many topics can be a problem, but I don't think it kills the movie in and of itself. I've seen movies I thought tried to handle too much at one go, and while I've found them flawed, critics actually raved about them.

So my bottom line is: to each their own. I loved this movie, and the soldiers' scene above all in it.

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