Kudos to those who made this short. You should be very proud!
Though I try to stay away from critiquing indie products (even the expensive ones), I would've done one thing a tad differently. When the pedestrians were watching the hero fight Haleo-13, at some point you should've had at least one of them point up at the sky. It's too classic of a Superman symbol to have been left out. Just my observation.
In all, good job! I'll be recommending this to my friends.
Awsome short film!
shareLikewise. I anticipate very big things for the filmmakers in the future. Congratulations on your marvelous film.
- JR
Amazing!! Why can’t more Hollywood films have original stories like this?!
Great direction! Excellent acting. The story takes it's time in an intriguing way. Loved the visuals! I'm going to have to look for the clues 'motif's that I'm hearing.
Can you buy the DVD??! There's nothing on the tomorrowsmemoir.com site
I agree. This was in incredible film. The visuals and theme were outstanding.
I liked, at the end, when he was opening the chest. He looks at the broken key and then you hear the sound of the lock being broke open. :D
Very well done film. Head over to IFilm.com to check this one out.
"The more complex the mind, the greater the need for play." - Capt. Kirk in Shore Leave
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I liked the part with the lock too, but my favorite (on my second viewing of the short) was the "I don't fly much anymore" line :)
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