What is wrong with The Deal?
If you read the plot synopsis of The Deal and Syriana, they sound surprisingly similar. Someone uncovers some shenanigans related to the merger of two large oil companies. The potential for both intrigue and important information revelation here is tremendous.
While I do agree that this is a area desperately in need of discussion and presentation, I think The Deal is the worst possible vehicle for Hollywood to attempt to breach the walls of secrecy surrounding peak oil. In much the same way that The Day After Tomorrow was perhaps the worst vehicle to address global warming.
What is wrong with The Deal?
1) I could glean only 4 "facts" from this film: gas is 6$ per gallon, Blackstar provided 500,000 brls, Blackstar's reserves were valued at $20 billion, and oil reserves in the ground are valued at $3 x # of barrels in the ground (estimated at 7 billion). All of these facts are made-up. How many barrels a day does the US import? How many barrels of the world's reserve are located in the middle east? What is the rate of depletion in Saudi Arabia? What is OPEC's excess capacity? Given the constellation of actual useful facts not one of any merit was presented.
2) Hollywood uses the Russian Mafia the way they used to use neo-nazis, a PC bogeyman. Given Russia's perennial involvement in the Great Game, I don't object to them being involved, but why not portray them accurately? The Russian Mafia is a perfect stand in for the current brand of klepto-capitalism. The new industrialists in Russia were oligarchs who allied with state bureaucrats to loot state-owned assets to fatten their offshore bank accounts. Here they are presented as brainless eurotrash who cant even succeed in keeping a Harvard MBA tied to a bed with nylon cord.
3) To classify the "enemy" of this "war" as the Confederation of Arab States, is to miss the central point of the conflict we now face. Many of these states are our allies. There is no confederation, there are only faceless networks and splinter groups. There is no monolithic Arab State. Two minutes of stock war footage at the start of this film is the only explanation that there is a war. Later we learn that there is an embargo. Later still we learn that the "French or the Chinese" are presumably not involved in this war. Some obvious questions include, who are we bombing? There is no military power in the middle east with the exception of Israel that would take longer than 2 months for the US military to neutralize. This is the whole reason why middle eastern states avoid direct confrontation and prefer asymmetrical warfare.
4) Embargoes are ineffective in wartime. If the CAS embargoed the US, their revenue would drop to nothing. Let’s suppose they decide to sell all of their output to China, India and Europe instead, how do they transport it? By tanker. Who has the largest navy in the world? The US. Why wouldn’t US warships sit at the entrance to the Persian Gulf and just seize every tanker than tried to exit?
Many people at the Pentagon,, the State Dept, the CIA, and numerous think tanks have spent years analyzing many possible contingencies related to this hypothetical war. Richard Clarke the counter-terrorism expert has just finished a novel called Scorpion’s Gate about a coup by radical anti-western extremists in Saudi Arabia. This would be an excellent flashpoint around which to build a film like this.
Yet there is no mention of any geopolitical forces at play or the nature of the conflict. The only thing at stake is some investment banker’s reputation for signing a due diligence letter for a corporation that happens to have overvalued it’s oil reserves. There is no mention of depletion, the scarcity is entirely the result of the embargo.
I realized that this film could have followed pretty much the exact same formula if the commodity in question had been gold, caviar or Persian rugs. Engineer a conflict which prevents the free flow of some scarce resource, then present a possibility of profit for the Russian Mafia to act as go-between and sell the product to the US. Also, if the main stumbling block was getting this merger approved, then why merge? The Russian shell company could just as easily continued to purchase oil from the CAS and repackage it for transshipment to the US. This is called arbitrage. If the Russians were trying to hoodwink Tolson and split with their $25 million (????), then why was he the one preventing Hanson from doing the due diligence?
5) Why even bring in The Ethics Taskforce at the end of the film? (As if such a thing could possibly even exist after the Bush Administrations). Is the government complicit in this “merger?” Is that why the Senator covers up the whole scandal at the end? The most important person in this whole affair was the CEO of the large US oil company, Tolson. Wouldn’t it be more interesting if Tolson bought his way onto the ticket and would up as either the Secretary of Defense or the VP? That they then engineer a coup by radical extremists in Saudi Arabia which shuts down the oil supply. Also, Christian Slater should have played the bad guy, he makes a terrific villain, and a horrible good guy. Selma Blair should have been the protagonist, the bright Harvard MBA who figures the whole thing out, with the help of Fransoise Yip.
6) The Alternative Energy Tax Credit – I learned more about alternative energy sources on one episode of The West Wing last year. This was a total snipe hunt that detracted from the film as a whole, as if that is even possible.