15 minutes of film stretched into 80
Honestly, when you have a wraparound, opening credits over black, end credits, and a completely retarded "hey this scene is going nowhere lets rewind the film for a while" sequence (not to mention at least a dozen shots consisting of nothing but a doorway that is usually difficult to tell where it is in relation to whats going on), and your film is STILL only 80 minutes long, maybe you should have just made a short film.
Just a suggestion.
Also, when two characters are talking to each other, they shouldn't be facing the same way when you cut back and forth (the scene on the porch before Brian goes to the barn).
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