As i sit here watchin it thru again i have to agree, except for one slight niggle.....
The editing could be punchier, just a tad. par example:
The mailbox scene edits could be cut by shavings of a second to give it a more frenetic comic tempo, this could allow the music to come in a bit quicker which of course is the marker for the implied sexual shenanigans.
The end scene in the Kitchen could have the same treatment too.
As i said before, just minor niggles, just my personal preference ;)
a great short.
BTW got mine off of the web too! excellent, this and 'the line of masculinity' are 2 of the best web movies i've seen.
"I Blame Television...."
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