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If you guys had read the first draft script


You would be appalled. I refuse to see this movie because of it, it was that bad.


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There was an alternative end?

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There was an alternative everything...the first draft is so awful, it will always baffle me that someone read it and went, "Yep, let's greenlight this." My god.


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You haven't seen the film, yet you know that it alternates everywhere from the first draft. Riiight.

Whoever read it produced a film that is rated 94 per cent on rottentomatoes, so you also baffle me.

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When I said "alternative everything" it was just a figure of speech. I didn't mean everything had literally changed. Anyways, I've seen the movie since my first post, I was forced to watch it. The movie was actually a lot better than the script. What must have happened was they read a bad script with a good idea, commissioned a lot of rewrites, possibly bringing on seasoned writers, then made the movie. But the first draft was really awful. I don't understand how the final script was nominated for an Oscar and the first one was so bad, and both were written by the same person. This really baffles me.


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Post us the first draft then. There is only one writing credit for this film, seasoned writers coming in should have got a credit.

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I can't post it. I have no idea how my professor got it but the fact that it doesn't exist anywhere on the internet should say that it's not widely available for a reason, and I don't want to violate that reason. Yeah, I know, you'll probably think I'm lying about having a copy, but I honestly wouldn't go to so much trouble to post on the board of some decade old movie otherwise.


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OK that's fair enough.

But why would your professor give you a bad first draft, then not explain the process from bad draft to great script and film? Is he just a bitter man?

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Ha. He is a bitter man, sometimes. No, it was so we could do a development report on it.


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@Screen

Nobody ever does a film off of a first draft---if you know anything about how films are made, you know that's never the case.

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I know they don't shoot movies off of first drafts. But I didn't think they'd move forward with a badly written one, either. That's what surprises me, the fact that they read the first draft and decided there was something they could work with. I thought it was just straight-up awful. Clearly they saw something in it that worth salvaging.


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Yeah, I know, you'll probably think I'm lying about having a copy, but I honestly wouldn't go to so much trouble to post on the board of some decade old movie otherwise.


It literally takes less than 5 minutes.

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True but not the point.


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It's gonna leave its mark somewhere.

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What the heck is your point? It's a pretty darn good movie. Who gives a crap if the first 90 pages the screenwriter vomited out weren't good.

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The point was that Screen Queen was amazed that the original draft was so much different from the final movie. Nothing complicated.

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either the director or the producer thought the idea was great but the script needed a rewrite, a little bit of input and you have inspiration.





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