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a poem I wrote about Zhao Wei's character.....


Hey, people!! I wrote this piece because I was enchanted by Sue's mischievous charm. Actually, I believe this poem doesn't do her much justice, but the n again, I was really aching to do a piece for her...anyway, here it is.....




TO WEI WEI

You wield your gun against your adversaries
dodging shards of glass reflecting prisms of light

Your smile of triumph crinkles from the cormers of your lips
barely missing the drop of blood spurting from their mutilated legs

You are my muse, whose flowing hair contains of strands
having the smooth contours of palm leaves stroke my face,

While I see you leave and touch your lips with mine as I feel the bullet
of the fire of your charms rip my heart and gushed forth pools of blood
staining your face, leaving me with gasps of contentment
amidst the shards of glass
piercing my cheeks



.....I really appreciate to know what you think...thanks!!

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I like Qi Shu. Although the other one was good too.

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Nice poem! I think your a great poet, doing poems about movie characters. 5***** out of 5*****

"Because of Gravity"

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Hehehehe....thank you!! Actually, I have to revise this, doesn't do that hot dame much justice, it's not at par with her beauty....hahahahahaha!!!! Thanks a lot!!

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she is my hero! thats all i have to say

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