I'm writing a book...

I'm trying to write a novel of this and the other games in the series and I was hoping for some feedback on my idea. I don't care what people say even if it's "you suck you worthless peice of sh!t"


-A young man and woman stumble uppon Myst, a shabby book that transports them to a strange island where they must help two men trapped in books by finding pages around the island and the adjoning "ages". But when the pages come to life and form different personalities, the two heroes must decide if they should trust the brothers, or another strange man trapped in a book.