Scouring of the Shire


Was anybody else disappointed that the Scouring of the Shire was completely left out ? I was actually looking forward to it. It's one of my favorite parts of the whole trilogy. It could have been really great to see the Battle of Bywater and to see just low and shameful Saruman had become.

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I was disappointed, but it was obvious that the Scouring of the Shire had never been filmed when it was revealed that Peter Jackson had killed off Saruman and Wormtongue at Isengard.

"If I'm going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!" - The Joker

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It's funny. When I first read the book it seemed like an unnecessary let-down. After saving Middle-earth the Hobbits engage in a "police action" in the Shire. Re-reading over the years I came to see why Tolkien thought it was so important to the story but I also understood why the filmmakers left it out. As it is, the standard complaint is that that there are "too many endings" and I think a lot of viewers would have felt the way I did initially.

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It could have really been made in an interesting way as well. Wormtongue had apparently become even more gross, crawling around and such. I think Tolkein even compares him to Gollum at that point. And Saruman's death could have been very cool visually because he turns into a giant cloud and is blown away.

So yes, it is a very minor conflict compared to the previous epic battles. But it could have been something which would have served as a very interesting closing. They didn't just come back and sit at the local pub and feel like outsiders. They actually came back and became heroes.

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I wasn't disappointed because PJ had already stated that the Scouring was not going to be included in the film before it was released. I completely understand his decision because PJ interpreted the source material into the mold of an action movie, and as such it needed to meet certain audience expectations. Depicting the Scouring after the climax of the Ring's destruction followed by the coronation/wedding/bow-to-no-one scene would have been seen as anticlimactic by the majority of the movie-going audience who were unfamiliar with the books and already having their patience taxed by what they perceived as "multiple endings."

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I wasn't disappointed because PJ had already stated that the Scouring was not going to be included in the film before it was released.


I knew it before the release as well. That didn't make it any less disappointing.

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It worked for me, changed my expectations. If I had gone into the theater either expecting that the Scouring would be depicted or at least believing the Scouring might be in the movie, then I probably would have been disappointed. Same goes for the Bombadil scenes in FotR.

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Bingo

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The Scouring of the Shire is something very difficult to do in a movie, simply pacing wise. The movies build up to mount doom and the destruction of the ring as being the huge climax all previous movies were building to and once that happens at the end of a long movie, people are ready to go home.

The only way you could have had the Scouring of the Shire in a film is if they made a movie out of each book within LOTR. I mean two movies per. Two movies for Fellowship, two for Towers, two for King. This way, the last movie would have had the mordor/Mountdoom stuff as the MIDDLE of the movie opening a lot of space for the end to include the scouring of the shire.

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It was shown briefly in Fellowship when Frodo was talking to Galadriel. It's understandable why it was cut out for pacing issues.

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I wasn't disappointed that it wasn't included. I was disappointed with what replaced it. I would rather the movie ended at the crowning of Aragorn then bother with the rest of the scenes that followed.

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I wasn't disappointed that it wasn't included. I was disappointed with what replaced it. I would rather the movie ended at the crowning of Aragorn then bother with the rest of the scenes that followed.
Really? It wouldn't have felt right to me if we never saw the Ringbearers gathered at the end to take ship in the Grey Havens to sail into the West. And we needed some build-up to that; we couldn't just transition from Minas Tirith to Mithlond.

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ending on Aragorn also makes it a movie about Aragorn. That's not what/who the story is about.

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ending on Aragorn also makes it a movie about Aragorn. That's not what/who the story is about.
True, but the replacement to the Scouring of the Shire hardly did justice to how much Frodo was affected by the ordeal. The book makes Frodo's need to leave understandable. The movie doesn't.

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I'm not sure you can say 'it doesn't' but, of course, it doesn't as well or as effectively as the book.

However, much of what works so well in the book is all internal and hard to portray on the screen. In fact, I think a lot of what helps show Frodo's deteriorating state of mind is almost subliminal. (I wrote a little essay on this once.)

I would argue - as well - that, to a large extent, the actions that take place in the Scouring of the Shire isn't what shows how much Frodo is affected. I understand why the Scouring was left off and I think it not only was a good decision on the part of the filmmakers but it wouldn't have achieved what you think it would have in terms of Frodo's state of mind.

There is a decent attempt to show the effects of these events on Frodo in the movie. There's that look at the coronation.
http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/rotk/rotk2421.htm
There's the look all four Hobbits give each other at the Green Dragon.
http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/rotk/rotk2434.htm

There's the voiceover back at Bag End. "How do you go on, when in your heart you begin to understand, there is no going back. There are some things that time cannot mend."

There's the look in Frodo's face as he writes in the Red Book.
http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/rotk/rotk2458.htm

He actually looks a little ill here:
http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/rotk/rotk2459.htm
http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/rotk/rotk2460.htm

And as someone pointed out in a past discussion in another forum, compare these two images:
http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/fotr/fotr0103.htm
http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/rotk/rotk2452.htm

The first is a house full of life. The second is a house stripped of life. This is a house of someone who's preparing to step away from his life.

I can buy that the book does it better. The book almost always does it better but one can't make a book *be* a movie. One adapts a book into a movie and there are always pluses and minuses.

But I'm not sure I can buy the argument that the movie didn't show how Frodo was affected so we might as well have ended it on Aragorn. That deletes what we did get and I can't make sense of that.

Look, I love the book gazillion times more than the movies. But I don't use that love to overly judge the movie. I do judge it for things it could have done and didn't. But I don't think the movie could have shown Tom and be a successful movie. I don't think the movie could have shown the Scouring and be a successful movie. (and by successful I mean that it is a 'good' movie. I'm not defining success in any monetary ways)

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Look, I love the book gazillion times more than the movies. But I don't use that love to overly judge the movie. I do judge it for things it could have done and didn't. But I don't think the movie could have shown Tom and be a successful movie. I don't think the movie could have shown the Scouring and be a successful movie. (and by successful I mean that it is a 'good' movie. I'm not defining success in any monetary ways)
I really wasn’t asking for the Scouring of the Shire to be part of the movie. I just don’t feel that the scenes following Aragorn’s crowning to successfully show why Frodo had to leave. For me, it just didn’t work. In fact, I think it seemed like extra fluff on an already long movie that didn't do much to finish the story. While I do use a book comparison, it isn’t because of the book that I say it doesn’t work. I get that film is a different medium but that doesn’t mean it should be criticism-free or get a pass when it tries to do something but it doesn’t work…which is what usually seems to happen any time any part of the series is critiqued.

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Well, the Scouring of the Shire does not illustrate that Frodo cannot remain in the Shire if he is to heal. What it does show is how the four Hobbits have changed and matured over the course of their journeys. They have become capable and wise leaders and fighters, ready to take their places in their community.

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Well, the Scouring of the Shire does not illustrate that Frodo cannot remain in the Shire if he is to heal.
You're right. It is after, during the rebuilding of the Shire, when Sam notices Frodo is always in pain on the anniversary of the Ring's destruction that it is made apparent Frodo will never find peace in the Shire.
What it does show is how the four Hobbits have changed and matured over the course of their journeys. They have become capable and wise leaders and fighters, ready to take their places in their community.
Again, I agree. Them sitting in the pub, quietly enjoying a pint while exchanging knowing looks hardly shows how much they grew through their journey.


I never had high expectations for the end of RotK. Not after Saruman was killed off in the TTT, anyway. I knew at that point the Scouring of the Shire was, at best, going to be greatly reduced in impact. But after seeing how the movie played out after the crowning made me wonder why they bothered dragging out an ending that did very little (at least for me; this is only my opinion after all) to progress the story after that point.

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I never had high expectations for the end of RotK. Not after Saruman was killed off in the TTT, anyway. I knew at that point the Scouring of the Shire was, at best, going to be greatly reduced in impact.


Saruman is not "killed off in the TTT". His fate is left unaddressed in the Theatrical Release editions of the films, and he is killed at the beginning of RotK EE, but I can see how that death at the beginning of the RotK Extended would make you doubtful about any Scouring at the end of that same disc movie, a year or so after the issue had been settled in movie theaters.

But after seeing how the movie played out after the crowning made me wonder why they bothered dragging out an ending that did very little (at least for me; this is only my opinion after all) to progress the story after that point.


What do you mean, here? Is this in reference to the coronation part or the back-in-the-Shire part?

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Saruman is not "killed off in the TTT". His fate is left unaddressed in the Theatrical Release editions of the films, and he is killed at the beginning of RotK EE
Thanks for the correction! It has been awhile since I watched the trilogy as separate movies; the end of one movie and start of the next blur a bit.
What do you mean, here? Is this in reference to the coronation part or the back-in-the-Shire part?
It was in reference to everything after the coronation. The story flat-lined after the coronation for me. In the book, following the coronation is largely getting back to the core of the story - the hobbits and how their experience(s) changed them. Unfortunately, the movie didn't bring that home for me.

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It was in reference to everything after the coronation. The story flat-lined after the coronation for me. In the book, following the coronation is largely getting back to the core of the story - the hobbits and how their experience(s) changed them. Unfortunately, the movie didn't bring that home for me.


I understand. I do think PJ's options were very limited in the denouement if he wanted to remain true to the core elements of the story (the Shire is saved, but not for damaged Frodo, and Sam becomes whole). He had to get the hobbits back to the Shire, he had to show that their experiences had changed them, he had to show that Frodo was particularly wounded, and had to show the departure from the Havens and then Sam "back" - and he had to do it all without overtaxing everyone's patience.

What we got is a minimalist compromise, sparse but efficient.

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Really? It wouldn't have felt right to me if we never saw the Ringbearers gathered at the end to take ship in the Grey Havens to sail into the West.
Sadly, yes. The Scouring of the Shire and subsequent rebuilding showed just how much the Ring had impacted Frodo. Him sitting at the tavern, enjoying a pint with his friends almost as though nothing had happened hardly showed how much Frodo had grown and how difficult his ordeal was. Most everything that followed Aragorn's crowning [in the movie] did nothing for me.


...Yet another reason RotK is worst of the trilogy for me.

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If you think they were simply sitting there "enjoying a pint" at the end I think you missed the point of that scene. They felt like strangers in their own home after everything they'd been through together.

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I agree, I was a bit disappointed that that Saruman was killed off at Isengard. They missed out climatic stuff like when the shire was exploited and almost ruined by Saruman and his cronies. I was hoping to see it added to the extended version, but it never happened. *sigh*


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well, there is a little 'homage' to it at Galadriel's mirror.

http://www.framecaplib.com/lotrlib/html/episodes/images/fotr/fotr1343.htm

But I get you were looking for more than just that homage. :-)

Peter: Yeah. And we also introduced the elements of the Scouring of the Shire in the scene as well.

Fran: Yes.

Peter: Because the Scouring of the Shire, as readers of the book will know, is a sequence that happens at the very end of the third book, and we don’t have it in our movie; and yet, we wanted to give the concept of what’s at stake, and it is ultimately the Shire that’s at stake in Frodo’s heart: that he is doing what he’s doing to protect his homeland. And so we used the Mirror – more so than what’s in the book – we used the Mirror in the film to show what would happen to the Shire should the… should Sauron be victorious.

Philippa: One of the reasons Sam isn’t here is because this is a critical scene for Frodo. This is the scene in which the full weight of what he must do – the decision that he faces – is clearly put to him by Galadriel; and that is the purpose, really, of the entrance into Lothlórien.

Peter: We also wanted to use this scene in a way to plant the seeds in Frodo’s mind that the Fellowship cannot be trusted anymore, it can’t be relied upon anymore, and that the only logical way forward for Frodo is, really, to break off from the others and to go alone…

Philippa: [at same time as Peter] Or he… Yeah.

Peter: And we wanted the scene to end with a sense that Frodo… you know, that there was now a very definite option for Frodo: that he –.

Philippa: But not so much that… Not so much that he can’t trust them anymore, it’s that if he stays with them, he will be the death of all of them. He can only bring them death by staying with them.

Peter: [Frodo sees the Shire burning in the Mirror] This is our homage to the Scouring of the Shire. And this is the concept of what’s going to happen to the Hobbits should –.

Philippa: [at same time as Peter] Sandyman’s mill.

Peter: There’s Sam and Rosie being led into the factory to a life of servitude in the Hobbiton steelworks.

Fran: Which is, pretty much, how Tolkien saw the transformation of Birmingham, wasn’t it? [Philippa agrees] From this pastoral –.

Peter: [at same time as Fran] The Midlands… Beautiful Midlands countryside –.

Fran: – to industrial hellhole.

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I was so glad it was left out. I hate so much that part in the books. Every time I read it, it angers me: when that idiot Frodo and his companions encountered Saruman and Wormtongue, they could have easily taken them into custody, then bring them to trial and make them pay for the countless innocent lives they destroyed (especially Saruman). But no. Frodo, who is known for his "wise" decisions, decided to let those scums go freely, and to visit Bilbo - what delayed the hobbits' return for several months, allowing Saruman to take over the Shire and terrorize its residents. 19 hobbits were killed due to Frodo's sheer stupidity. Who the **** authorized him to pardon Saruman?! Just because a villain is in poor shape, does that automatically erase his criminal record clean?!

What I find very annoying that Saruman did not even bother to hide his vile intentions. He gave the idiots a very blunt hint of his plans. Only Sam and Gandalf were concerned that Saruman might do something bad, but the self-appointed leader Frodo decided there was nothing to worry about.

And even after the hobbits defeated Saruman's gang, even after Saruman tried to stab Frodo - Frodo still did not learn a lesson. He insisted on letting Saruman go, free to destroy more innocent lives. I bet Saruman's future victims would not find consolation in the fact that by letting him go, Frodo robbed Saruman the sweetness of his revenge.

Good thing that Wormtongue had the guts to do what the idiot hobbits did not, and should have done as an act of justice.

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well.. you've got an interesting read on the whole thing (and that includes the entire book since what comes before impacts the SotS). I will say that.

You're pretty worked up about it, too.

thanks for sharing. :-)

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Mya_Stone, you have a thought-provoking take on this.

On those occasions I am bold enough to say what the author's intentions were, I would probably say your take is exactly the opposite of Tolkien's, but I'm not feeling it, today.

First, a point of order:

when that idiot Frodo and his companions encountered Saruman and Wormtongue, they could have easily taken them into custody, then bring them to trial and make them pay for the countless innocent lives they destroyed (especially Saruman). But no. Frodo, who is known for his "wise" decisions, decided to let those scums go freely, and to visit Bilbo - what delayed the hobbits' return for several months, allowing Saruman to take over the Shire and terrorize its residents. 19 hobbits were killed due to Frodo's sheer stupidity. Who the **** authorized him to pardon Saruman?! Just because a villain is in poor shape, does that automatically erase his criminal record clean?!


I don't think the meeting on the road would have allowed anyone to prevent the degradation of the Shire, which was already well under way. Lotho was the figurehead Boss before Saruman arrived. You could argue that the ruffians and such could have been driven out more easily if Sharkey were not there, but that is speculative at best.

To the heart of the matter:

And even after the hobbits defeated Saruman's gang, even after Saruman tried to stab Frodo - Frodo still did not learn a lesson. He insisted on letting Saruman go, free to destroy more innocent lives.


I think it would kinda pull the rug out from under the whole story if Frodo spent the whole 5 1/2 books that preceded learning the value of pity and mercy, and then his critical choice at the end was retributive justice/vengeance.

There is also the issue of what you are trying to preserve in the Shire. If you imagine the Shire and its hobbit inhabitants in their idyllic state, and then you think "The one thing missing here is the killer instinct", then I can't help you.

Frodo was many things by the end of the journey - weary, damaged and wiser about the world. I think at this point he was aware of the passing away of many things that had once been important in the world and would soon be gone.

'No, Sam!' said Frodo. 'Do not kill him even now. For he has not hurt me. And in any case I do not wish him to be slain in this evil mood. He was great once, of a noble kind that we should not dare to raise our hands against. He is fallen, and his cure is beyond us; but I would still spare him, in the hope that he may find it.'


In addition to his wish that Saruman have at least opportunity to find redemption, Frodo doesn't want the death of such a higher order being, the likes of which not to be seen again in Middle-earth, to come at the hands of a hobbit.

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He was great once, of a noble kind that we should not dare to raise our hands against. He is fallen, and his cure is beyond us; but I would still spare him, in the hope that he may find it.'
This brings to mind a little essay I wrote once in answer to this question:
What kind of comment is Tolkien making in having evil characters (Gollum, Saruman) put effectively in prisons from which they escape because of the "soft-heartedness" of their jailers?

My answer:
Oh, I would never presume to say what comment Tolkien is making. That smacks too much of "there's one right answer and here it is" but...
Here's what gets conjured up in my mind.

Fate and pre-determination play heavily in the LOTR. Gandalf says that Bilbo was 'meant' to find the ring so as to pass it on to Frodo and thus Frodo was also 'meant to have it'. Gildor tells Frodo in the woods that "In this meeting there may be more than chance; but the purpose is not clear to me." Elrond says, "(Deciding what to do with the ring) is the purpose for which you are called hither. Called, I say, though I have not called you to me, strangers from distant lands. You have come and are here met, in this very nick of time, by chance as it may seem. Yet it is not so. Believe rather that it is so ordered that we who sit here, and none others must now find counsel for the perils of the world." All of these passages hint at a belief of a 'guiding hand' or a 'providential order'.

But along with this 'guiding hand' we also see constant belief in free will. Bilbo was meant to find the ring but faced the decision of whether to kill Gollum or not. Frodo was meant to inherit the ring but must decide whether to attempt the task of its destruction. Elrond tells Frodo, "If I understand aright all that I have hear...I think that this task is appointed for you, Frodo; and that if you do not find a way, no one will...But it is a heavy burden...I do not lay it on you. But if you take it freely, I will say that your choice is right."

Many examples can be found of the free people's belief that there is a guiding force but that each always has a choice. In fact, that is a major difference between the behavior of the free people and that of Sauron and Saruman. Sauron and Saruman seek domination and control whereas when Frodo says that Gollum deserves death, Gandalf replies "Deserves it! I daresay he does. Many that live deserve death. And some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends. I have not much hope that Gollum can be cured before he dies, but there is a chance of it." Gollum must be given the chance to choose good or evil. To kill him would deny him that chance.

I think the free people could act against evil when needed. But I think it is never treated as a glorious act in the LOTR. And when faced with long term incarceration of Gollum (by the elves) and Saruman (by the Ents) that niggling "free will" thing was always in the back of their minds. They wanted the evil/danger contained. But action against evil is easiest when it is accomplished quickly. To maintain a prolonged imprisonment of an individual, in effect controlling him and robbing him of free will, requires great conviction. I wonder if this was just a little hard for the elves and the Ents to maintain over time. Perhaps their conviction relaxed enough to show some kindness (in the case of the elves) or be 'convinced' of mercy (in the case of the Ents). Legolas said, "We guarded this creature day and night, at Gandalf's bidding, much though we wearied of the task. But Gandalf bade us hope still for his cure, and we had not the heart to keep him ever in dungeons under the earth, where he would fall back into his old black thoughts." Treebeard said, "Now do not tell me, Gandalf, that I promised to keep him safe for I know it. But things have changed since then. And I kept him until he was safe, safe from doing any more harm. You should know that above all I hate the caging of live things, and I will not keep even such creatures as these caged beyond great need."

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because I am an Ent, I'll make another point in a separate reply.

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The second thing I thought of while reading your reply is this concept of 'leader' making all the decisions. There are times where people in the book step up to lead. But in most cases, it really seems more of an administrative role (someone has to decide what to do next, we agree it will be X) rather than some sort of ego-boost, oligarchical position.

I was so moved by the end of LOTR I set out trying to figure out why. Starting from when Frodo woke up in Ithilien, I started documenting everything I could observe about him and how Tolkien *wrote* about him.

One by one, bit by bit, the people in Frodo's life who had been supportive of him, say goodbye. Until finally, it's time for Gandalf and Aragorn to bid the Hobbits farewell.

The hobbits, and I think especially Frodo, looked at both Gandalf and Aragorn as protective father figures. When they say good-bye to Aragorn, Tolkien writes, “The hobbits were grieved at this parting; for Aragorn had never failed them and he had been their guide through many perils.” Frodo says, “There is no real going back. Though I may come to the Shire, it will not seem the same; for I shall not be the same. I am wounded with knife, sting, and tooth, and a long burden. Where shall I find rest?” and “Gandalf did not answer.” Both of the figures that had been providing support, guidance, and advice were now removed from Frodo’s life. I think it showed the hobbits’ growth. If they were child-like in the beginning, they have matured into adulthood now. They must make their own way in the world, but facing all the adult cares and worries can be a daunting thing.

I had been observing, in this entire section, how Tolkien writes of Frodo as an increasingly passive character.

We are given little insight as to how Frodo is feeling or what he is thinking. Sam wakes up aware of the soft bed, swaying tree boughs, glimmering sunlight, and sweet smells. But Tolkien does not let us into Frodo’s head. He does laugh occasionally, but Tolkien doesn’t write from Frodo’s viewpoint. We don’t hear of his taking delight in sounds, smells, sites. Throughout the rest of the chapters Sam, Merry and Pippin are responsible for most of the conversation and activity . It seems a subtle removal of Frodo’s personality. The concrete is that he’s not as visible to us because the other hobbits are carrying the story. The inferred, I believe, is that Frodo is withdrawing... from his friends, his previous life, and the world.

In “The Field of Cormallen”, Frodo is led by people, dressed by people and made to stand back to back with Merry and Pippin. Others are directing his activities.

In the “Scouring of the Shire” twice, comments are directed at Frodo but Frodo is not the one that answers. When Sam begins to see the destruction of the Shire he “was beside himself. ‘I’m going right on, Mr. Frodo!’ he cried. ‘I’m going to see what’s up. I want to find my gaffer.’” This is not the voice Sam would have used with Frodo at the beginning. Regardless of the ‘Mr.’, Sam is no longer looking to Frodo for guidance or permission. (He means no disrespect, I’m sure) But more interestingly, Frodo is not the one who answers. Merry is. He is taking charge about what must be done with the ‘gang of ruffians’. Later, when the hobbits are told that some of the men have ‘shot one or two of our folk’, Merry cries ‘There you are, Frodo. I knew we should have to fight. Well, they started the killing.’ Farmer Cotton is the one who replies, however. I think this was another way of ‘removing’ Frodo, bit by bit from those around him. Circumstances have forced and fostered growth in everyone. They are feeling confident. I don’t think they’re ignoring Frodo. But I think that these interchanges were deliberate on Tolkien’s part in making us feel the Frodo’s separation.

Sometimes war heroes come home and they become great, glorious leaders. but... "Following the end of the American Revolution, Washington addressed Congress on December 23 in Annapolis and resigned his commission. Through this action, Washington gave the power back to the people and was declared a hero around the world."

He gave the power back to the people. I just recently heard a historical figure described as a 'cincinnati' which sent me right to the internet to investigate. Cincinnati (the city) derives its name from the Society of the Cincinnati (a society founded in 1783 arising from the Rev. War). The Society derives its name from the Roman, Lucius Quinctius Cincinnatus.

Cincinnatus, who had held some office prior, was a small farmer when he was called to lead Rome against its foes. "Cincinnatus maintained his authority only long enough to bring Rome through the emergency. He then resigned and returned to his farm." "Further, he refused the honors that came with his military victories."

The point has been made about Frodo's increasing fragile health and state of mind. But I also think there is this sense of handing power back over to the people. Merry, Pippin, and Sam are ready to step into playing a larger role now. And the people of the Shire are able to defend themselves under the guidance of these three. (and Rosie... she was pretty ready to step into an important role in this, too!)

The point is, if one person is leading in a more dictatorial way, then others aren't given a chance to grow and learn what they are capable of. I would argue that a good leader is a facilitator and knows when to step back and let all individuals find their voice and build a community.

I'm not so sure Frodo was making these intellectual choices... he was, I think, responding more from mental and emotional fatigue. But Tolkien writes the story in such a way that, as Frodo steps back, other step up. I don't think it's an accident or coincidence or PLOT HOLE (whatever that means these days!). (in fact, after reading about Cincinnatus, I have to wonder if this was any inspiration at all for Tolkien when creating the character of Frodo)

The more I read the books, the more I understand the complex relationships between people, their choices, their actions, and the influences and outcomes of those things. I never fault a movie-only fan for not divining depth like this from the movies. But I kind of shake my head at someone who's read the book and so completely missed these sorts of things.

/Ent out.

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I don't think the meeting on the road would have allowed anyone to prevent the degradation of the Shire, which was already well under way. Lotho was the figurehead Boss before Saruman arrived. You could argue that the ruffians and such could have been driven out more easily if Sharkey were not there, but that is speculative at best.
That's inaccurate. The hobbits suffered under Lotho's reign, but once "Sharkey" arrived, things got hundred times worse:
It was about last harvest, end o' September maybe, that we first heard of him [Sharkey]. We've never seen him, but he's up at Bag End; and he's the real Chief now, I guess. All the ruffians do what he says; and what he says is mostly hack, burn, and ruin; and now it's come to killing. There's no longer even any bad sense in it. They cut down trees and let 'em lie, they burn houses and build no more.
Whether the ruffians could have been driven out more easily - that's not the point: the point is that a lot of the damage and suffering could have prevented if the companions returned immediately to the Shire. It's like putting out fire, which has already destroyed several houses, before it spread to destroy a whole town.

Frodo doesn't want the death of such a higher order being, the likes of which not to be seen again in Middle-earth, to come at the hands of a hobbit.
So, just because Saruman "was great once, of a noble kind" - does that gives him immunity of being tried and punished for his deeds? I don't think so.

What are criminal law and prisons for? Just for fun, or a whim? They exist to prevent criminals from harming others.

In addition to his wish that Saruman have at least opportunity to find redemption
Let's see:

During the meeting on the road or at any time, did Saruman ever express any remorse or regret for his crimes, even the slightest? No. On the contrary, he blamed the companions for his misfortune.

Did he ever show mercy to any of his victims? No.

Did he give up his sinful ways? No. That's what the chapter "Scouring of the Shire" is all about.

So about what "redemption" are you talking? Is that the way to make up for the countlss innocent lives he destroyed - by destroying more?!

Mercy and compassion are good traits, but even they have limits. Whoever is responsible to massacre of innocent people, let alone whole communities, and never showed any mercy to others, nor any regret - does not deserve mercy. He deserves justice.

I believe that villains deserve a second chance, but for that, the sinner must take responsibility for his crimes; feel regret; amend the wrongs he did - Saruman never did any of those. Still, he was given a second chance (which IMO did not deserve at all) and chose of his free will to continue doing ill to others.

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just a couple of random thoughts....

I don't think Tolkien is dealing with sin in his novels and I think issues can get muddled really quickly when we try to impose our own concepts over top of what Tolkien is trying to get across. I think Tolkien is going for something completely different than what you think should happen to people who behave the way the characters are in this novel.

That said, all good art* is a matrix for examining ourselves as much as the art. So when we find ourselves in this sort of dichotomy between what we think makes sense and what the author is trying to get across, it's a great time to examine our own thinking (such that we can understand it better, refine it better, question it perhaps) and that of the author/artist's (why would the artist write it this way? What is he seeing I don't or what is he trying to say that I'm not getting?)

*using art as a catchall term for films, paintings, songs, books, etc.

In the end, though, one can say... "I'm just not buying it." As in, "I'm just not buying into what Ayn Rand is selling. (Objectivism)" or "I'm not on board with what Corand puts forth in Heart of Darkness (Nihilism) or maybe you just don't see the world as cynically as depicted in Heller's Catch 22.

We should be making critical* judgments about everything around us. What do *I* think about this. What do I agree with? What do I disagree with? and most importantly "Why do I think what I think and why might the author think what they think?"

*critical as in 'analytical' not 'disapproving'

Doing that stretches the mind and there's nothing wrong with your viewpoint on justice being different than Tolkien is setting forth in LOTR. (side note: it does help to have read more of Tolkien's writings... in other works, he shows some really bad outcomes from people seeking 'justice'.)

But that's not to say that the writing or character development in LOTR is flawed. It is, in fact, highly consistent throughout and Frodo's motivations and reasons for his actions (as are other's) are fairly well supported throughout the book. Tolkien had something he wanted to get across and he did it fairly well. In fact, I'd say everything time I read/listen to the book, I get a new insight into how well he did it.

If you're just seeking a book that reflects your own paradigms, expectations, and philosophies... perhaps LOTR isn't the book for you. But if you use it as a tool to understand yourself and/or Tolkien (and we can seek to understand those we disagree with... that's not treason or anything), it could be a quite rewarding exercise.

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(side note: it does help to have read more of Tolkien's writings... in other works, he shows some really bad outcomes from people seeking 'justice'.)


There is a fair bit of this in LotR, as well.

As mutual friend Dijomaja pointed out to me a while back, Isildur's taking of the Ring is form of taking justice for the wrongs that Sauron has done - done to Middle-earth, to Gondor, and personally to him and his family. Isildur let's it go beyond the military correction of the problem and he takes weregild, a blood payment in gold in the form of the Ring. Furthermore, he attaches this to the kingdom as an heirloom, effectively cursing himself, the kingdom and Middle-earth.

There's also his 'justice' for the Oathbreakers, which is a whole other can of worms.

I personally cannot discount Frodo's words of recognition that Saruman is of a great and noble kind to which they (Hobbits) should not dare to raise a hand. This is not a throw-away line, IMO. I can imagine some alternative version of the story where the Shire folk, under Sam's leadership, let's say, take Saruman into custody, lock him in the hoosegow and try him for his crimes, and then either hang him or keep him in a cage. I don't think the Shire would ever be scoured or cleansed in that scenario.

BTW, Frodo's leadership in the matter of mercy is not limited to Saruman. It is not just ruffians and goblin men who have caused all the trouble. There are hobbits who are complicit; there are collaborators and people who profited from the troubles (or tried to). Frodo is reluctant to condemn Lotho, shows great pity and love towards Lobelia, and generally sets the tone for post-industrial reconciliation in the Shire. His attitude towards Saruman tracks along that same line.

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Well, I did not mean the hobbits were the ones to judge Saruman and carry out the verdict - only to apprehend and deliver him and Wormtongue to whoever was authorized to prosecute them. Who would be the judge, I believe Aragorn or Theoden (had he not been killed) were good choices.

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The Hobbits of the Shire were subject to King Elessar (Aragorn), but he would be thousands of miles away in Minas Tirith until the rebuilding of Annúminas in the Fourth Age. The rightful ruler of the Shire in the name of the King was the Thain, who at the time of the War of the Ring was Paladin (II) Took, father of Pippin. The Mayor of Michel Delving was in charge of the Shirriffs and the Post.

"If I'm going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!" - The Joker

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Let's see:

During the meeting on the road or at any time, did Saruman ever express any remorse or regret for his crimes, even the slightest? No. On the contrary, he blamed the companions for his misfortune.

Did he ever show mercy to any of his victims? No.

Did he give up his sinful ways? No.


No, you are absolutely correct that he is unrepentant to the end.

That's what the chapter "Scouring of the Shire" is all about.


Actually, that is the point of contention, here, and I disagree.

So about what "redemption" are you talking? Is that the way to make up for the countlss innocent lives he destroyed - by destroying more?!


I'm only paraphrasing what Frodo says, and it never transpires, obviously. And that's a ginormous strawman, the bit about destroying more lives. Clearly no one is advocating that.

This is intriguingly similar to the confrontation at the foot of Orthanc, and I note that in that particular moment, Gandalf is about half way between your position and Frodo's. He wants to give Saruman a chance to redeem himself (rejected), but absent that he wants to keep the deviant locked away where he can do no more harm. (Contrast to Theoden, who wants Saruman dead for the lives lost and damage done.)

Even Tolkien doesn't present Frodo as unassailably right in all of this. After his spiritual journey and transformation he declines to carry any weapon, but obviously he is still quite dependent on others doing so. The fact that he is giving voice to a standard of mercy that may not seem natural or appropriate to others doesn't make him right or better, necessarily, any more than it makes him stupid (I think that was the word you used).

There is no shortage in this world, the real world or the one of art/literature, of advocacy for taking life in the name of justice/vengeance/prevention. LotR just isn't an example of that viewpoint.

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There is no shortage in this world, the real world or the one of art/literature, of advocacy for taking life in the name of justice/vengeance/prevention. LotR just isn't an example of that viewpoint.
Nice summation.

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During the meeting on the road or at any time, did Saruman ever express any remorse or regret for his crimes, even the slightest? No. On the contrary, he blamed the companions for his misfortune.

Did he ever show mercy to any of his victims? No.

Did he give up his sinful ways? No. That's what the chapter "Scouring of the Shire" is all about.
I strongly disagree. The chapter is about how the four hobbits have grown and matured during their experiences and how they have returned to the Shire as better and wiser individuals. Tolkien has placed Sharkey there to highlight those qualities in our heroes.

"If I'm going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!" - The Joker

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Very interesting discussion here. Personally I've only read the books once and really didn't like that part. So I was happy it was omitted.

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