My thoughts precisely. I am not sure if the problem is with the movie's editing or the script, but the last 20 minutes were rushed. Kathleen and Joe's transition from foes to friends felt slightly artificial. I think it would have helped if the audience had seen them in different scenarios where they didn't just talk about Kathleen's infatuation with NY152 (e.g. passing each other by on the street and saying hi, bumping into each other again at Zabar's but this time standing in line together and chatting). Also, it would have been nice to see Kathleen be responsible for some of their encounters (e.g. she sees Joe on the street and calls his name) -- to demonstrate her growing sense of fondness and trust. As it is, Kathleen's words "I wanted it to be you so badly" feel a little forced. For all we know, she saw him three times and only briefly after his visit to her apartment. That's hardly enough time for romantic feelings to develop.
Similarly, I thought that the movie would have benefited from having a scene where the audience saw Joe deciding to go back to Cafe Lalo. Even on this forum some people are confused about the reason why Joe returns back and is so flippant with Kathleen. Of course Tom Hanks is an actor of extraterrestrial talent and delivers Joe's anger and disappointment with deadly precision. (There is Tom's old interview with Charlie Rose where Tom mentions that Joe's primary motivation in the movie is his fear of ending up like his father and grandfather -- with five unhappy marriages and no faithful and loving partner. So it's easy to see why Joe is angry and upset when he realizes that Shopgirl, "the most adorable creature" he's ever encountered, is this pill Kathleen Kelly who hates his guts. His dream of finding a kind and understanding companion is quickly crumbling.) So it still works. But I thought that it would have helped the story flow more smoothly if the audience could have witnessed Joe making the decision to go back.
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