Anakin killing Windu scene, was so poorly done/written


Still bothers me every time I see it. For such a huge moment of the Star Wars saga, can't believe that dramatic scene was so poorly scripted. Windu was told by Anakin about the deceit. Yet Windu feels he has to yell that he not part of the conspiracy. When they are fighting? That don't even make sense. Windu has no reason to explain himself to Anakin. It's actually Anakin that is not trusted by most of them. Witch is why Windu wouldn't tell him what he is about to do. Tells him he can't be trusted and must kill?? No way! Would not give Anakin even a chance to turn on him. And yes he obviously thought Anakin was wavering by everything said up till then.

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Anakin annoyed me so much in that scene. He's constantly breaking the laws of the Jedi and yet he talks about "the Jedi way" in keeping Palpatine alive. Granted it's for a selfish reason, but the way this whole scenario was scripted was bad. I wanted to punch him when he whined afterwards in attacking Mace Windu.

It also annoyed me how Mace couldn't even convince Anakin to see how evil Palpatine is by not mentioning Qui-Gon Jinn's fate.

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Yeah this movie is so overrated.

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The worst part of the movie: the Palpatine confrontation

There are so many plotholes in this part of the movie:

1. Why wouldn't Mace Windu and the other Jedi confront Palpatine in public or in the Senate? This could potentially expose him as a Sith Lord, and the Senate would be unlikely to grant him any additional power.

2. Why would the Senators buy Palpatine's story? How could an average person survive an assassination attempt by Jedi Knights? How exactly would one be "scarred" and turn into grotesque looking monster because of the Jedi? Everything points to Palpatine being evil and having supernatural powers but the Senators are too stupid to pick up on it.

3. Palpatine becomes deformed by his Force Lightning. Why doesn't Luke get deformed by Palpatine's lightning in ROTJ?

4. Who were those weak Jedi with Mace Windu that didn't even fight back? Using a lightsaber when you have tentacles on your head that flail every which way is a dumb idea may I add.

5 Anakin says "it's not the Jedi way" when Mace Windu is about to kill Palpatine.

6. Earlier, Palpatine told Anakin "only I can save the one you love." But then says "the power to cheat death is a power only one has achieved. Together, we can work to uncover the secret." So Palpatine lied and made a false promise. If I was Anakin, I'd be pretty pissed.

7. Anakin has essentially just learned that Palpatine was the one orchestrating the assassination attempts on Padme. You can make some BS claim about the Dark Side clouding his judgement, but that's a pretty big oversight.

8. Others say Palpatine was that grotesque looking monster thing all along and merely dropped his guise . If so, why is this the first time we see Palpatine exploit this ability to shapeshift? If I was Palpatine, I would turn into the monster looking thing while talking to my Sith apprentices, just in case anyone saw me. I would also revert back to my normal self before appearing in front of the Senate. After all, asking the Senate to give you supreme power when, in a matter of hours, you became a deformed monster in a black cloak is a pretty tough sell.

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Great points but number 6 stands out to me the most!

Anakin basically follows palpatine around like a puppy dog, and kills Mace to keep Palpatine alive simply because he was told that he has the power to save Padme. Seconds after the murder, Palpatine basically says, "Oh yeah, I don't have that power but let's work together to find out!"

If Anakin was any normal person, he'd be like, "What? Are you kidding me?", and then stuck a blade right through Palpatine's head.

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Only palpetine gets deformed by the lightning. Mace Windu didn't get disfigured either. So it is inly the user of the lightning who gets the side effects.

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1.) Aye, I've always thought this myself but, confronting him in public wouldn't necessarily expose him if he doesn't try to fight back or defend himself... The Jedi would certainly succeed in making themselves look like trigger happy pricks though. They'd be back at square one, only now with a Republic that doesn't trust their judgment as much.

2.) Palpatine is one of the most powerful Sith in the entire SW lore. Considering what he's accomplished over the course of his life, this guy is a master deceiver and master strategist... I don't think it's beyond his ability to be able to emanate through the Force just the right amount of influence and persuasion to convince the Senate of his story. Think of it like a Jedi mind trick, only, with his power, it affects a much greater area and # of people, dumb or smart.

3 & 8) I'm semi-okay with the whole "he always looked that way and was simply disguising himself" explanation because there are some really key details in the novelization that strongly suggest that the fight with Windu, Anakin's arrival, etc were all part of the plan (i.e. Palpatine let Windu disarm him and make the whole thing look like he was a helpless old man). Palpatine says stuff like "I'm weak, I can't go on any longer" one second but once Anakin intervenes, he's at full power, no problem. Letting the disguise fade away would only bring Anakin to his side even more.
The final detail I think that supports the disguise theory has to do with the Darth Plagueis book, which I haven't read but apparently mentions that Palpatine had a shriveled look, likely due to his extensive use of the Dark Side

4.) Aye, this annoyed me as well. Their only excuse I think is that they were caught off-guard and by surprise, potentially due to their weakened foresight/use of the Force in general. None expected an old man to ignite a lightsaber and lunge out of his seat like that. Still, they died in a stupid way and the scene makes it look like they should have had all the time in the world to react to him. Definitely could have been written to fight back a tiny bit before being defeated.

5.) Agreed here too. Stupid of Anakin to say such a line when he's never really followed the rules himself. He only wants to enforce them when he has something to gain...selfish.

6.) Actually, Palpatine never directly admits to knowing how to create/save life, but Anakin certainly interprets it that way, which is exactly what Palpatine wants.
"Learn to know the dark side of the force and you’ll be able to save your wife from certain death" - all he's saying here is that learning the dark side will allow him to save Padme, that ONLY through the Dark side, is this possible - he isn't saying he knows how to do it.
Either way, Anakin certainly believed otherwise, and your point is that he should be pissed, which I agree with, BUT, Anakin loves Padme and is clearly willing to do anything to save her... So even if he's sitting there thinking to himself "this motherf*ker lied to me..." he still knows that Palpatine, with the knowledge he has, is his only chance at saving her.

7.) I agree, but at the same time there are a lot of puzzle pieces to link together, some being from Anakin's childhood that his memory would be fuzzy on. I do think we need to fall back on the whole "clouded judgment" idea because in the end, ALL the Jedi are made to look pretty stupid for being unable to detect a Sith Lord that's literally been right in front of them for years.
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4) there is nothing stupid or wrong here, its just writing that fit the character. Like you say it was anakin being selfish. He didnt nessescarily care about "the jedi way", he was just trying convince windu to not kill palpatine by appealing to the jedi code. When windu is unmoved by anakins comment, anakins very next piece of dialogue is then "NO! I need Him!"

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Even the choreographer admitted that he didn't do a good job of making it convincing.

Originally, George Lucas wanted Sammo Hung to be the fight choreographer for the prequels. Sammo is better at group fights, as is often the case with Hong Kong fight choreographers (who tend to think in three dimensions).

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1. How often do the Senate meet? Anakin told Windu that Palapatine told him he was a Sith Lord so Windu is quite right to suspect that Palpatine will not play nice until the next Senate meeting.

2. I assume he told them that Anakin saved him. After all, Anakin led the assault on the Jedi Temple so it's not like Palpatine planned to keep Anakin's role a secret.

3. Fair point. Maybe Palpatine was using more power fighting for his life against Windu while he wanted to torture the helpless Luke a bit.

4. Yes that bit was very badly done.

5. He's trying to save Palpatine and is appealing to something that might sway Windu.

6. Well technically, only Palpatine could help him rediscover Plagueis' secret.

7. He knows from AOTC that was only done to keep Nute Gunray in line rather than any ill feeling towards Padme on Palpatine's part. And of course Padme's importance to Anakin was not known by Palpatine at the time. But yeah this could have been better handled.

8. Never thought he was a shapeshifter at all to be honest.

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Windu, yet another cardboard figure from the prequels... just standing there for 3 movies.

You should have been relieved when he died :)

I'm just on my way up to Clavius.

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IMO altho hats off to GL for giving us such an entertaining and versatile franchise - he then busily set about screwing the whole thing so badly it's breathtaking... From basics like the fact Light Sabers should only be able to be made to function by their individual creators - with their subsequent power and versatility (ie. what and how well they can cut, what types and how well they can deflect blaster shots etc.) dependent on the degree of force mastery of their operator - to more nuanced aspects like the characterisation of Anakin in RotS, Lucas almost completely misses the mark with virtually ALL aspects of the SW saga outside the basic plotlines.

The characterisation of Anakin in RotS is completely wrong and awful and IS terribly and clumsily written. His moody, whiney *beep* characterisation leaves the audience with no other choice but to rejoice in his final crossing of the line to the dark side - with a huge sigh of relief and a "thank god for that!!". The physical character used should have been someone like the actor who plays Anakin's cousin in the film - a baby faced, irrepressibly cheerful and thoroughly likeable character reminiscent of young Anni who everyone ends up totally endeared to and watching with real horror as the steps of his subversion at the hands of Palpatine unfold.

Alan Dean Foster in his novelisation of A New Hope aludes to one of the final steps in a Jedi's achieving mastery of the force being construction of their first Light Saber. In a spinoff novel also by AD Foster called "Splinter of the Mind's Eye" the story centres on a mystical Crystal which amplifies The Force - in fact Leah is killed in battle with Darth Vader at the end of the novel but Luke brings her back to life with the Crystal.

Force Crystals are also touched on in the pc game "Jedi Knight II" where "Dark Troopers" use crystals to fight using force powers (the player battles these individual Dark Troopers at stages thruout the game - picking up a crystal at the end of each successful despatching of a Dark Trooper and increasing their own strength). SO... - perhaps Palpatine's subversion of Anakin could be based on his having a Crystal which he uses to gradually seduce him by warping his nature and amplifying the Dark Side influence in him.

The possibilities are endless and fascinating - for example the whole Crystal idea could basically be what defines Sith vs Jedi - ie. Sith embrace an "easy" path to developing Force Powers via use of these mystical Crystals - with the type of Force Power developed being of course Dark Force - whereas Jedi very deliberately eschew such "mechanical" means to developing Force Powers and instead tread the more enlightened and positive path of embracing The Force contained in all living organisms.

All kinds of elaboration are possible - ie. perhaps Force Crystals don't occur naturally (or if so, only extremely rarely) but are actually generated and grown thru meditation and specific type of focus by force adepts - with again the central notion being that as opposed to the positive living organism type force their force power is lifeless and basically "dark side" in nature. Perhaps the critical part of a Jedi building a saber is to create a tiny "seed" force crystal - which involves mastery of being able to focus and control dark force to a certain degree without being drawn to the dark side - and then tune and focus it within the mechanism to be able to generate the force blade of the saber - a physical manifestation of focussed force power, and the only such "mechanical" usage of the force tolerated by Jedi.

Perhaps the nature of force crystals could be somehow bizaarly similar to the physics involved in power couplings which are used for things such as energy tethers and force field generators etc. - so the basis of young Anni's ability to be a successful podracer was because his naturally extremely strong force power led to him to not only be able to exercise superhuman reflexes to successfully drive his podracer in competition against non humans but also completely accidentally and obliviously generate minute amounts of dark force crystalline matter within the power couplings of his racer - thus making it much more powerful than it otherwise should have been according to the limited resouces and quality of materials he had at his disposal to build it. This early untutored exposure to dark force might be the factor subsequently recognised and exploited by Palpatine. The possibilities are endless and much richer and more sophisticated than anything George Lucas himself has demonstrated any ability to come up with - I mean - really? - midichlorians!?!?! - OMGWTF!!!???

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So much was ruined in just one scene, not that the prequels could have been saved at that point but goddamn that was the ONE scene that if done right could have given these horrible movies a reason to exist.

But no, Lucas had to ruin that one too by completely humiliating the Emperor by turning him into a pussy who begs for his life like a wimpy Disney villain (I guess the joke is on me now...) and resorting to lame cowardly tricks to defeat an opponent that he should be capable of Force-electrocuting to death in a second.

Strongest Lord of the Sith my ass : Palpatine is a weakling and a pussy now, thanks a lot Lucas you fat idiot.

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Look up the word ruse in the dictionary

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I went and look for "idiot" and found your picture. You suck.

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That was uncalled for.

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" . . Lucas had to ruin that one too by completely humiliating the Emperor by turning him into a pussy who begs for his life like a wimpy Disney villain . . "

When I watch the film, I don't buy that Palpatine is as helpless as he claims. And even if Mace does have him soundly subdued and at his mercy, I don't believe that Palpatines whimpering was meant to be understood as authentic -- but only a performance to manipulate Anakin into intervening.

If I thought he was truly whimpering in that scene I don't think it would change much for me, since the objective was accomplished when Anakin folded, but I can see how it could annoy others.

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The whole movie is poorly written.

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OP, STFU.

The rest of you on this thread who agree with him: STFU.

The scenes are AWESOME. End of.

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I agree. Revenge of the Sith is fantastic. My second favourite Star Wars movie.
People just whine to whine.

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Yeah no, the Windu vs Palp confrontation and death scene are TRASH, just like the rest of the prequels.

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Your opinion was not solicited.

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This is the internet, more specifically a message board. Solicitation is irrelevant.

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You sound 5.

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